1. Of mice and men
Style

2. Style
This can be a challenge to write about but being able to focus on the language of the writer is the key way to achieve the highest possible grades in all your exams.
Writing about style shows the ability to look beyond the text and the story and to be more critical and analytical about the writer’s work. Simply retelling the plot is dull and will not get marks.

3. Steinbeck's Style
What?
Typical examples and why they are significant?

4. Steinbeck's Style Tight and controlled he uses every word carefully.
Lots of key details to help set the scene and atmosphere
He often uses the five senses
His style is simple and straightforward.
Harsh and hard language that is typical of the ranch workers
Use of images, simile, metaphor and personification
Linking imagery
Foreshadowing of events that create a dark mood and atmosphere
Look for examples of Steinbeck’s style as you read

5. Getting a good grade
A good essay in the exam will focus on the question
You might plan quickly key ideas
You should highlight key words that you want to focus on
You will always use quotes
You will always use PEE = C or higher
You should always focus on the language used= higher grade skill

6. What are the Key words and focus for an essay plan?
Why is the fight scene important in Of mice and men? How does Steinbeck build up atmosphere and tension?
What are the key words? What should you focus on?
What are the Key words and focus for an essay plan?

7. Essay Why is the fight scene important in Of mice and men?
How does Steinbeck build up atmosphere and tension?
What are the key words? What should you focus on?
Key words and focus for an essay plan

8. Set the scene- but beware of story telling = loose marks
Why is the fight scene important in Of mice and men? How does Steinbeck build up atmosphere and tension?
Set the scene- but beware of story telling = loose marks
Link to themes that are shown
Who is involved and how do they react?
Why is this scene so significant for the characters?
How does Steinbeck build up tension and atmosphere? Language and style

9. Find examples of the build up of tension and atmosphere – look for:
Violence in speech
Images and used
Choice of descriptions / language
Fear built up
Speed of events
Tension in their relationships between the men
Contrast between Lennie’s gentleness and Lennie’s power

10. Find examples of the build up of tension and atmosphere – look for:
Violence in speech: ‘You god damm punk’
Images and used: ‘flopping like a fish’, ‘bleated with terror’
Choice of words: ‘smashed’ ‘slashed’
Fear built up: ‘Lennie looked helplessly at George’
Speed of events everything goes out of control: ‘George ran across the room’
Tension in their relationships between the men ‘Candy joined in the attack with joy.’
Contrast between Lennie’s gentleness and Lennie’s power ‘Lennie covered his face’ ‘blood ran down Lennie’s face’

11. Task
Read through the following student examples looking for good writing and what they can do to improve and get the grade.

12. Student responses
This scene is important because it is the scene where Lennie crushes Curley’s hand. He shows how strong he is and how he can easily loose control over himself.
At first Lennie does not react, despite Curley attacking him however when George shouts ‘Get him Lennie’ he does fight back. Lennie’s strength is uncontrolled and this is one of his main problems.

13. Student responses –
Steinbeck uses the fight scene to show the easy violence and frustrations on the ranch and in the times that George and Lennie were living through. The scene builds up with a tense atmosphere of cruelty, relish and violence. It is an escape from the mundane lives the men live working hard on a ranch in poor conditions, with few rights.

14. Student responses
In this scene Lennie crushes Culey’s hand. He is in the fight because Curley is bullying him and Curley was annoyed.
Lennie is very strong and this is seen when he attacks Curley. Curley’s hand is totally crushed.

15. Student responses
In this scene Lennie crushes Culey’s hand. He is in the fight because Curley is bullying him and Curley was annoyed.
Lennie is very strong and this is seen when he attacks Curley. Curley’s hand is totally crushed.

16. Planning
Good writers plan – it can be as simple as six key bullet points a mini mind map or six headings with some notes
If you run out of time you can write ‘see essay plan’ and you will get some credit for your ideas. If you haven't planned and run out of time then you won’t get any more marks.
Keep focused on answering the question and the ideas that you have been asked to write about. DON’T RETELL THE STORY. DON’T WRITE EVERYTHING YOU KNOW ABOUT STEINBECK.

17. Task
Write your own opening to the essay: Why is the fight scene important in ‘Of Mice and Men’? How does Steinbeck build up atmosphere and tension?
Write a six point plan for this essay with brief notes about that you would include.
Write useful and brief revision notes on Steinbeck's style reminding yourself to focus on language and language and language to get the higher marks.