1. Day 1 Revision of an illogical comparison Revision of choppy sentences Capitalization of name of town “The Street of the Cañon” has more details about old Mexico than any story I have read. The story opens in a village. San juan iglesias is the village. It is May.

2. Day 1 “The Street of the Cañon” has more details about old Mexico than any other story I have read. Revision of an illogical comparison The story opens in May, in the village of San Juan Iglesias. Revision of choppy sentences Capitalization of name of town

3. Day 2 Correction of commonly confused words Use of commas with nonrestrictive clause Elimination of unnecessary preposition A stranger walks passed the dark homes of the village. The stranger who is carrying a package enters into the home of Don Roméo Calderón.

4. Day 2 A stranger walks past the dark homes of the village. Correction of commonly confused words into The stranger, who is carrying a package, enters the home of Don Roméo Calderón. Use of commas with nonrestrictive clause Elimination of unnecessary preposition ____

5. Day 3 Changing word order to improve style Spelling out ordinal number Use of adverb to modify a verb It is Don Roméo Calderón’s daughter’s 18 th birthday. The stranger quick gets permission to dance with her.

6. Day 3 It is the eighteenth birthday of Don Roméo Calderón’s daughter. Spelling out ordinal numbers Changing order to improve style The stranger quickly gets permission to dance with her. Use of adverb to modify a verb

7. Day 4 Use of quotation marks with title of song Correct formation of contraction Correct past participle of irregular verb The stranger asks the band to play The Shy Young Maiden, the favorite song of his village. Because of a quarrel, his people and the people of San Juan Iglesias have’nt spoke in years.

8. Day 4 The stranger asks the band to play “The Shy Young Maiden,” the favorite song of his village. Use of quotation marks with title of song Because of a quarrel, his people and the people of San Juan Iglesias haven’t spoken in years. Correct formation of contraction Correct past participle of irregular verb

9. Day 5 Use of apostrophe to show possession Elimination of superlative form of absolute adjective Elimination of double subject The strangers package contains a delicious cheese made by his father. As the guests enjoy the most perfect cheese, they realize that the stranger he is from the other village.

10. Day 5 The stranger’s package contains a delicious cheese made by his father. Use of apostrophe to show possession most he As the guests enjoy the perfect cheese, they realize that the stranger is from the other village. Elimination of superlative from of absolute adjective Elimination of double subject ____