1. Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 feudalism a social system based on loyalty and land tenure Corrected Feudalism was a social system based on loyalty and land tenure.

2. Proofreading Warm-up Item 2 Women in medieval society was always subservient to men irregardless of whether or not they was marryed. Corrected Women in medieval society were always subservient to men regardless of whether or not they were married.

3. Proofreading Warm-up Item 3 ballads sung in the Appalachian mountains were discoverred by researchers to be markedly similar to many british ballads Corrected Ballads sung in the Appalachian Mountains were discovered by researchers to be markedly similar to many British ballads.

4. Proofreading Warm-up Item 4 For example the Appalachian Ballad John Randolph is very much like the scottish ballad Lord Randall. Corrected For example, the Appalachian ballad “John Randolph” is very much like the Scottish ballad “Lord Randall.”

5. Proofreading Warm-up Item 5 Everyone accept Heather have all ready read the ballad Get Up And Bar The Door. Corrected Everyone except Heather has already read the ballad “Get Up and Bar the Door.”

6. Proofreading Warm-up Item 6 Being as the armor was so heavy and had so many peices a knight could not dress himself for battle his servants had to help him. Corrected Because the armor was so heavy and had so many pieces, a knight could not dress himself for battle; his servants had to help him.

7. Proofreading Warm-up Item 7 The wieght of some suits of armor exceded one hundred pounds Corrected The weight of some suits of armor exceeded one hundred pounds.

8. Proofreading Warm-up Item 8 Wouldnt that kind of a burden make it more harder for the medieval knight to fight in battle. Corrected Wouldn’t that kind of burden make it harder for the medieval knight to fight in battle? [a deleted; more deleted]

9. Proofreading Warm-up Item 9 Geoffrey chaucer he was a government official whom served under three kings Corrected Geoffrey Chaucer was a government official who served under three kings. [he deleted]

10. Proofreading Warm-up Item 10 the greatness of The Canterbury Tales lays largly in Chaucers skillfully use of language Corrected The greatness of The Canterbury Tales lies largely in Chaucer’s skillful use of language.

11. Proofreading Warm-up Item 11 Beside The Canterbury Tales what other works of literature use a framing device. Corrected Besides The Canterbury Tales, what other works of literature use a framing device?

12. Proofreading Warm-up Item 12 scholars beleive Chaucer might of been influenced by the writeing of Giovanni Boccaccio. Corrected Scholars believe Chaucer might have been influenced by the writing of Giovanni Boccaccio.

13. Proofreading Warm-up Item 13 Do you think that people with the Pardoners ethics and tricks still exist today queryed cheryl. Corrected “Do you think that people with the Pardoner’s ethics and tricks still exist today?” queried Cheryl.

14. Proofreading Warm-up Item 14 The two knights Sir Lucas and him tryed to lift the king which is wounded bad. Corrected The two knights, Sir Lucas and he, tried to lift the king, who was wounded badly.

15. Proofreading Warm-up Item 15 Initialy sir bedivere does not do like king arthur commands. Corrected Initially Sir Bedivere does not do as King Arthur commands.