1. Revision Rubric English 11 Brad Hutchinson

2. Ideas and Development A clear, intriguing message or story Unusual details Original insights or a unique perspective Takes the reader into the author's world Based on experience and imagination

3. Ideas and Development The Key - Does the writer go beyond the obvious to create an intriguing picture for the reader?

4. Organization A great lead to hook the reader Clear transitions - with a surprise or two A main point or storyline to which all details connect Pacing that doesn't push and shove or bog the reader down A strong ending that leaves the reader feeling as if the piece is complete

5. Organization The Key - Does the organizational flow keep the reader reading? Keep the reader hooked?

6. Voice Writing that bears the fingerprints of this writer Text a reader would love to read about A reader would feel that the writer is speaking right to him or her

7. Voice The Key – Would a reader want to share this piece of writing with others? Would a reader want to keep reading?

8. Word Choice Wording and phrasing are memorable and lyrical Words create pictures in the reader's mind Strong verbs lend the writing power Specific nouns paint a clear picture

9. Word Choice The Key - Would key words or phrases linger in a reader’s mind?

10. Sentence Fluency Sentences are easy to read, silently or aloud Sentence beginnings are variable and purposeful The writer is playful with style - short punchy sentences pop up amid the longer ones Rhythmic, expressive phrasing enhances voice

11. Sentence Fluency The Key - Is it fun to read aloud? Could a reader read this piece aloud with expression?