1. Your Body Paragraphs Going from the outline to proper paragraphs

2. This is what you start with: TS: Zeus was the considered to be the king of the gods. C: However, this was not always the case. Zeus had to earn is place in Olympus. To become king of the gods, Q: “He overthrew his father, Cronus, and then drew lots with his brothers Poseidon and Hades, in order to decide who would succeed their father on the throne. Zeus won the draw and became the supreme ruler of the gods, as well as lord of the sky and rain” (Greekmythology). C: His other brothers were important, but none were as highly respected as Zeus. Zeus is the god of the sky, and Q: “He is armed with thunder and lightning, and the shaking of his aegis produces storm and tempest” (Atsma) C: which made him the most feared of all the gods. In addition to making a lot of noise, Zeus also cared about smaller, everyday things. For example, Q: “Zeus was also concerned with hospitality. If you treated a guest or stranger badly you could outrage Zeus” (Trustees of the British Museum).

3. TS: Zeus was the considered to be the king of the gods. C: However, this was not always the case. Zeus had to earn is place in Olympus. To become king of the gods, Q: “He overthrew his father, Cronus, and then drew lots with his brothers Poseidon and Hades, in order to decide who would succeed their father on the throne. Zeus won the draw and became the supreme ruler of the gods, as well as lord of the sky and rain” (Greekmythology). C: His other brothers were important, but none were as highly respected as Zeus. Zeus is the god of the sky, and Q: “He is armed with thunder and lightning, and the shaking of his aegis produces storm and tempest” (Atsma) C: which made him the most feared of all the gods. In addition to making a lot of noise, Zeus also cared about smaller, everyday things. For example, Q: “Zeus was also concerned with hospitality. If you treated a guest or stranger badly you could outrage Zeus” (Trustees of the British Museum). T: The many qualities of Zeus made him an important part of the daily life of the ancient Greeks. You need to make connections between your topic sentence and your fist quote And you need to connect your first quote to your second quote And your second to your third Finally, you need a transition

4. Zeus was the considered to be the king of the gods. However, this was not always the case. Zeus had to earn is place in Olympus. To become king of the gods, “He overthrew his father, Cronus, and then drew lots with his brothers Poseidon and Hades, in order to decide who would succeed their father on the throne. Zeus won the draw and became the supreme ruler of the gods, as well as lord of the sky and rain” (Greekmythology). His other brothers were important, but none were as highly respected as Zeus. Zeus is the god of the sky, and “He is armed with thunder and lightning, and the shaking of his aegis produces storm and tempest” (Atsma) which made him the most feared of all the gods. In addition to making a lot of noise, Zeus also cared about smaller, everyday things. For example, “Zeus was also concerned with hospitality. If you treated a guest or stranger badly you could outrage Zeus” (Trustees of the British Museum). The many qualities of Zeus made him an important part of the daily life of the ancient Greeks.