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Portrait dun champion Level 7 writing
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AT4 Writing I can write articles or stories about real or imaginary subjects giving my opinions and points of view My writing flows well, with full sentences and paragraphs I edit and redraft my work and use reference sources to improve it.
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THE AVOCADO SYSTEM! You should try to include all of these things in your written work and when preparing for speaking: A djectives V ariety of tenses O pinions C onnectives A dverbs D escription O riginality
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Portrait of a champion Draft 250 words on a winner. They can be from any field. Para 1 – General description. Where were they born? Details of schooling etc. (past tense) Para 2 – What have they done to become a winner? (past tense) Para 3 – Imagine that you are interviewing the winner. What is their normal routine. (present tense) Para 4 – What are the future prospects for your winner. What is he/she going to do in the future (future tense – use aller and the infinitive) Para 5 – your opinions on the winner and what you have leaned and can apply in your own life
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Para 1 Il est né / Elle est née – he / she was born Il est allé / elle est allée – he / she wnet Il / elle est de nationalité anglaise – he / she is English
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Para 2 Il / elle a Il est_______ / elle est ________(VAN DER TRAMP verbs) Connectives En plus – in addition Cependant - however De temps en temps – from time to time
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Para 3 Il / elle a dit – he / she siad Il / elle a expliqué – he / she explained Il / elle a contesté – he / she answered Connectives Généralement - generally Normalement - notmally Dhabitude - usually Le matin – (in) the morning Laprès- midi – (in) the afternoon Le soir – (in) the evening Le weekend – (during) the weekend Pendant les vacances – during the holidays
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Para 4 A lavenir il / elle va…. En outre – in addition Cependant - however Néanmoins - nevertheless Malgré cela – inspite of that
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Para 5 De mon point de vue – form my point of view Je crois que – I believe that Je pense que – I think that A mon avis – in my opinion Ayant dit cela, je trouve que – having said that, I find that Je suis daccord que ….– I agree that… Par contre – On the other hand Dune part – on the one hand Dautre part – on the other hand
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Conclusions You will have on Thursday in the computer room to research your winner. You will then email to me your 250 words by Friday 6 th July so that I can review your work and return it to you for a further draft on Tuesday 10 th July.
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