1. 1/29 CRESST/UCLA Through Writing and Presentations Communicate Your Research to the World… Ronald Dietel American Educational Research Association Meeting Chicago, Illinois - April 11, 2007 UCLA Graduate School of Education & Information Studies National Center for Research on Evaluation, Standards, and Student Testing

2. 2/29 CRESST/UCLA Point 1 - Simplify Point 2 - Practice

3. 3/29 CRESST/UCLA Writing “Specifically, we consider how the XXX Program could support teachers in assessing and improving their own practice, highlighting features that are directly relevant to use of the XXX Program for professional development purposes by drawing on what we learned from training educators unfamiliar with the XXX Program in an intensive rater training program during a pilot study in the spring of 2005.”

4. 4/29 CRESST/UCLA Research Writing Example Specifically, we consider how the XXX Program could support teachers in assessing and improving their own practice, highlighting features that are directly relevant to use of the XXX Program for professional development purposes by drawing on what we learned from training educators unfamiliar with the XXX Program in an intensive rater training program during a pilot study in the spring of 2005.

5. 5/29 CRESST/UCLA Simplified Writing Example Did the XXX Program improve teaching?

6. 6/29 CRESST/UCLA Book Writing Example It is becoming increasingly clear from work in the areas of developmental, social, and cognitive psychology that students’ evaluations of their personal competences, the importance they attach to these competencies, the personal significance they attach to particular learning tasks, and the ways in which these evaluations are used in the differential processing of information are critical determinants of motivation to learn and learning itself.

7. 7/29 CRESST/UCLA Find the Central Idea It is becoming increasingly clear from work in the areas of developmental, social, and cognitive psychology that students’ evaluations of their personal competences… the importance they attach to these competencies, the personal significance they attach to particular learning tasks, and the ways in which these evaluations are used in the differential processing of information are critical determinants of motivation to learn and learning itself.

8. 8/29 CRESST/UCLA Simplified Writing Example Students’ evaluations of their personal competences are critical predictors of motivation to learn and learning itself.

9. 9/29 CRESST/UCLA Avoid Long Titles Examining the Variability in the Achievement Gap Between Students with Disabilities and Non- Disabled Students Using Between-School Variation in Achievement of Students with Disabilities To Provide Guidance for Non-Cognitive Sources of Achievement Gaps with Non-Disabled Students

10. 10/29 CRESST/UCLA Simplify Titles Examining the Variability in the Achievement Gap Between Students with Disabilities and Non- Disabled Students Using Between-School Variation in Achievement of Students with Disabilities To Provide Guidance for Non-Cognitive Sources of Achievement Gaps with Non-Disabled Students

11. 11/29 CRESST/UCLA Short Title Achievement Gap Variation Between Disabled and Non-Disabled Students

12. 12/29 CRESST/UCLA Think of Movie or Book Titles Movies Star Wars E.T. Education A Nation at Risk Savage Inequalities The End(s) of Testing

13. 13/29 CRESST/UCLA APA Style Manual Short words and short sentences are easier to comprehend than long ones.

14. 14/29 CRESST/UCLA Writing Suggestions Write like a reporter Limit sentence length < 25 words Titles: < 10 Words Use active voice Simplify your words

15. 15/29 CRESST/UCLA The Ultimate Writing Test Ask a non-researcher to read your article

16. 16/29 CRESST/UCLA APA Says… The author who is frugal with words not only writes a more readable manuscript but also increases the chances that the manuscript will be accepted for publication.

17. 17/29 CRESST/UCLA Presentations

18. 18/29 CRESST/UCLA Perfect Presentations Your moment to shine Logistics Audience rapport Eye contact and gestures Verbal virus How do you get to Carnegie Hall?

19. 19/29 CRESST/UCLA More Presentation Tips Three key points Begin and end strong Fonts Hold the handouts Less is more, really

20. 20/29 CRESST/UCLA Formative Assessment Study Research Questions Are the district’s formative assessment aligned to state and school district content standards? Do the district formative assessments improve learning in mathematics? What is the correlation between performance on the district formative assessments and performance on the state test? Formative assessments that are not aligned to standards are not useful in guiding and informing instruction, Harker and James, 1998 Analysis of mathematics content standards that had been used to design third-grade assessments, was then used to design instruction--with learning experts Random selection of 400 students who received different types of math instruction (ten lessons each) before taking the district mathematics assessment: Data on mathematics alignment Evidence collected in mathematics formative assessment using different mathematics curricula and instruction Learning experts analysis of data Triangulation of data Study Limitations

21. 21/29 CRESST/UCLA Research Questions Alignment between standards and assessments Formative assessments and student achievement Correlation between district assessments and state tests

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23. 23/29 CRESST/UCLA Six or Fewer Information Points

24. 24/29 CRESST/UCLA Model-Based Assessment

25. 25/29 CRESST/UCLA 666 Rule Six bullets Six words per bullet Six information points on graphics

26. 26/29 CRESST/UCLA Final Presentation Tips Respect time limits Speak loud and clear Avoid going last

27. 27/29 CRESST/UCLA Summary Simplify Practice

28. 28/29 CRESST/UCLA If you want to be enthusiastic, act enthusiastic. Dale Carnegie

29. 29/29 CRESST/UCLA next presentation Ron Dietel voice fax email 310.794.9168 310.825.3883 ron@ucla.edu ©2006 Regents of the University of California