1. Five types of writing for the Internet (modified after the presentation) Larry Press lpress@csudh.edu http://bpastudio.csudh.edu/fac/lpress

2. Writing for the Internet Writing is important to students, parents and employers Five types of writing on the Internet –Conversations –Short documents –Collaborative writing – composite documents –Collaborative writing – jointly written documents –Collaborative writing – large groups (perhaps the general public)

3. Writing for the Internet Writing is important to students, parents and employers Five types of writing on the Internet

4. Students and parents agree that writing is important 83% of parents of teens feel there is a greater need to write well today than there was 20 years ago. 86% of teens ages 12-17 believe good writing is important to success in life -- some 56% describe it as essential and another 30% describe it as important.

5. Jason Fried’s hiring criteria Jason Fried, founder of 37 Signals, a leading software company speaking on what he looks for in an employee. Writing ability is the most important. positive outlook well rounded and flexible quick learner trustworthy -- will find a solution to a problem good writer Writing (34 sec) All five criteria (2m 42sec) Probably the most important thing and probably one of the surprises is you have to work with people who are good writers, Jason Fried, 2005.Jason Fried

6. Joel Spolsky Joel Spolsky, well known programmer and author on the importance of writing to a software developer. (15 seconds) Being able to write clearly, to write English clearly is more important to developing useful software than almost anything else and that's something you’re more likely to learn in the English department than in the computer science department, Joel Spolsky, 2009.Joel Spolsky

7. Writing for the Internet Writing is important to students, parents and employers Five types of writing on the Internet

8. Types of writing for the Internet Conversations Short documents Collaborative writing – composite documents Collaborative writing – jointly written documents Collaborative writing – large groups (perhaps the general public)

9. An email conversation Would you like to have lunch today? > Would you like to have lunch today? Yes, what time and where? > Yes, what time and where? How about noon at Felippes? Noon is great --- where is Felippe’s? > Noon is great --- where is Felippe’s? Near Union station --- here is a link: http:// … Great -- I will meet you there at noon. OK

10. Conversation examples An email conversation with an individual An email conversation with a group of people on a list server A conversation with a group of people on a threaded discussion forum A comment on a blog post

11. Types of Internet conversation Conversations for action: a request or offer which is subsequently confirmed or dropped Conversations for clarification: obtaining more information about something said earlier or in a prior conversation Conversations for possibilities: creating ideas and selecting one or more for future discussion Conversations for orientation: exchanging information about themselves or a situation (bilateral or unilateral, objective or emotional) Terry Winograd and Fernando Flores developed this taxonomy in the 1980s when the Internet and email were beginning to catch on.

12. Conversation: formal speech acts with dated commitments Request Action Decline (someone does it) Promise Request Action Declare complete Cancel Ask for progress report Report completion Revoke promise

13. Conversational writing requires careful reading Careful listening is needed for effective, responsive conversation. Careful reading is necessary for effective, responsive Internet conversation. Take the cotton out of your ears and put it in your mouth. Books must be read as deliberately and reservedly as they were written, Thoreau, Walden, 1854.Thoreau, Walden Students are defensive – do not believe it when you tell them their writing is unclear or off topic.

14. Types of writing for the Internet Conversations Short documents Collaborative writing – composite documents Collaborative writing – jointly written documents Collaborative writing – large groups (perhaps the general public)

15. Short document examples A blog post The initial message in an email conversation or a new thread in a discussion forum An entry in a database – for example a collection of movie or song reviews where each one is assigned to a different person

16. Students are not proficient writers of short documents Sample writing assignment: explain what a backpack is to an incoming, foreign 8 th grader. About one-third of America’s eighth-grade students, and about one in four high school seniors, are proficient writers, according to results of a nationwide test released on Thursday (NY Times, 4/3/08). Based on National Center for Educational Statistics, The Nation’s Report Card: Writing 2007. Data and report available online.

17. How do people read short documents on the Internet? Answer: quickly and superficially, starting in the upper left hand corner.

18. Distribution of page-stay times Even for first time visits to a site, half of the times were 12 seconds or less. 59,573 page views by 25 users with average age of 30.5 and 8 years Web experience.

19. View time versus number of words How many words can you read in 100 seconds? Readers scan Web pages.

20. Percent of words read at 250 WPM

21. Link click frequency on general and Google search pages

22. Being concise is not easy I would not have made this so long except that I do not have the leisure to make it shorter, Pascal, letter, 1656.Pascal, letter

23. Jakob Nielsen’s blog writing tips Picture your reader, their background, and interest in your topic. Write a clear, meaningful title that will help the user decide if the post is relevant (see The world’s best headlines).The world’s best headlines Work typical search terms into the title or first sentence. Begin with a short summary of your conclusions – what will users find in this post and how it is relevant to them? Keep the post short – use links for detail. Stay above the scroll if possible. Be sure a sentence or bullet point with a link gives an accurate picture of what it leads to – don’t waste the reader’s time. Include an image, table, or list to make it visually interesting and focus on key information. Write the post early then let it cool off and read it aloud. Get someone else to read it if possible In conversation, read carefully before writing (red = added)

24. Types of writing for the Internet Conversations Short documents Collaborative writing – composite documents Collaborative writing – jointly written documents Collaborative writing – large groups (perhaps the general public)

25. Collaborative documents Composite or jointly authored document Large or small group of authors Author group identified at start of the project or open ended Initiated by a leader or leadership group or by all authors jointly

26. Composite document Each section or topic is created and edited by a single person The independently authored sections are assembled to make the composite document The overall purpose and structure is determined in advance, though it might evolve

27. Composite document examples A class roster where each person enters their own information A list of potential exam questions and answers A collection of class notes in which a different student is responsible for each A report in which each section is assigned to a different person A collection of independently written short documents in which one person is assigned to be the sole author of each

28. Composite document tools Wiki Networked database Networked spreadsheet A database or spreadsheet has a defined format. One may also suggest a template for a wiki.

29. Wiki can begin with a template Class name and number: Professor: This class took a lot of time and work: (strongly agree, agree, neutral, disagree, strongly disagree) What was covered in this class: Why was this class important to you? Example1: Describe the best class you have taken at CSUDH

30. Wiki can begin with a template State the question What concept or skill is this question designed to test? What is the correct answer? Explain your answer Example 2: Define a multiple choice exam question

31. The template Established by leader or subset of the group members Established jointly by all group members Can the template be changed as the document evolves, and, if so, by whom?

32. Types of writing for the Internet Conversations Short documents Collaborative writing – composite documents Collaborative writing – jointly written documents Collaborative writing – large groups (perhaps the general public)

33. Jointly written documents Group members are free to edit any portion of the document Group members are free to restructure the document, for example, to add or consolidate sections

34. Collaborative writing examples A group of students writes a report on some topic Description of a public event as it is occurring Composite document in which anyone is free to edit any contribution – like Wikipedia

35. Some ways to begin a jointly written document One person starts with a short document or even a single sentence, and it grows organically One person writes the outline (perhaps just a list of points to be made), then others discuss and revise it, then they each draft a section One person writes the entire first draft (perhaps leaving “stubs” to be completed by others) then invites the others to improve it Group brainstorms the outline, then they each draft a section After the first draft is complete, they each revisit and improve it.

36. Revising and improving, from simple to complex Fix typos and spelling errors Fix grammatical errors Add a detail, reference or link Rewrite awkward or ambiguous sentences Add a clarifying example Add the draft of a new sub topic Reorganize or rearrange the document

37. Collaborative editing Remember, the goal is to improve the evolving document after each edit. As an example, check this video on the evolution of the Wikipedia article on the heavy metal umlaut or this post on the Mumbai massacre. heavy metal umlautthis post Debate controversy and explain changes in the comments section of the wiki page.

38. Types of writing for the Internet Conversations Short documents Collaborative writing – composite documents Collaborative writing – jointly written documents Collaborative writing – large groups (perhaps the general public)

39. Very large groups require structured solutions PublicMarkup, a platform for public discussion of legislationPublicMarkup Intel and ASUS incorporate social networking features in a project where they are asking the public to design a "dream" laptopasking the public to design Examples and discussion of the above

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