2. Syntax or Sentence Construction Correctness and Logic (Sequencing, Coordination, Subordination, Transition)

3. Syntax: Idea sequence Run-On: And about the store (transition), 誠品 音樂館, every month it has different topic of music like “classical music”, besides, it would take place some speeches concerning the topic. As for 誠品音樂館, every month it focuses on a specific topic of music, such as “classical music,” and holds some speeches on it. As for 誠品音樂館, it holds activities such as speeches and exhibition every month on a musical types or genre, such as “classical music” or “American blues.” Usage problems are underlined. Main Clause = Main idea Which is the most important idea?

4. There are too many difficulties that female rockers need to confront. Ani DiFranco, a famous rocker in the 90’s, once received the interview from Rolling Stone magazine and said that it took great courage (for a woman) to walk into the guitar shop, (while) all people in the shop would look at you and ask, “Are you buying something for your boyfriend?” (in a Rolling Stone magazine interview ) Syntax: Idea sequence (2)

5. Syntax: parallelism During that time, TV news contents were not only limited, but also the political parts were over- emphasized (uneven in its coverage, focusing too much on political news). Frankly speaking, TV news (programs) at that time was(were) not as informative as it is(they are) today.

6. Syntax & Style Nowadays, most of these kinds of record shops are replaced by chain record stores, just like those grocery stores, which are replaced by convenience stores. The best account for this mass fervor can be found in the formation of “Global Villiage” ensuing from the development of technology, such as the network, that shortens the distances between places around the world.

7. Syntax & Style It is because population is growing, and public poll is the easiest way to know the majority’s opinion. But why public polls become common and popular? The major reason, I think, is that with the growth of population, public poll is the easiest way to know the majority’s opinion.