1. Academic Writing for FYP Students (LCS)
Seminar 2
Íde O’Sullivan
Regional Writing Centre

2. Plan of seminars Seminars: Weeks 3, 4, 5
Tuesday 12:00 – 14:00 (HSG025)
Tuesday 15:00 – 17:00 (LG011)
Drop-in/One-to-one sessions: Weeks 7, 8, 9
Tuesday 12:00 – 13:00 (HSG025)
Tuesday 15:00 – 16:00 (LG011)

3. Plan of seminars Seminar 1 (Week 3): Layout/presentation/structure
Academic writing style
Referencing
Seminar 2 (Week 4):
Developing and sustaining an argument
Writing an effective abstract, introduction and conclusion
Seminar 3 (Week 5):
Editing and proof reading

4. Contents Writing an effective abstract
Writing an effective introduction
Writing an effective conclusion and discussion
Developing and sustaining an argument
Some helpful websites
Final words

5. Writing an effective abstract
What is an abstract?
Types of abstracts
Why are abstracts important?
What should I include in the abstract?
What should I not include?
Qualities of a good abstract
Style
How to write an abstract?

6. What is an abstract? Term often interchanged with summary
It is a brief, factual account of the content of a report or article
Highlights ‘the major points covered, concisely describes the content and scope of the writing, and reviews the writing’s content in abbreviated form’ (Literary Education Online: Writing Abstracts)

7. Types of abstracts
Descriptive abstract
Informative abstract

8. Descriptive abstract
Often used in electronic databases to facilitate keywords searches – abstracts therefore often contain key terms
Indicates key areas to be covered in the report
Is an extended statement of the scope or purpose of the report
Articulates the paper’s organisation, rather than its content
50-75 words
These “key terms” might be used by others researching in your area. Your abstract, should your report come up on a key word search, would indicate to the researcher the applicability of your research to their investigation.

9. Descriptive abstract Example:
“This article examines the economic, political and social forces at work in the Georgia wheat-producing region prior to the break-up of the USSR. The causes for failing birth rates in Georgia are explored, and the links between this problem and the collapse of the Soviet system are analysed”.

10. Descriptive abstract Written in present tense
Lists topics but does not explain what article says about the topics
Does not give results, conclusions or recommendations
Reader needs to find more by reading the text

11. Informative abstract
Kirkman (1992) believes this type is best and more useful to readers in most circumstances
Summarises the entire report
Gives the reader an overview of the facts that will be laid out in detail in the paper itself
Varies in length (200 – 300 words)
Is rarely longer than one page and should never exceed 10% of the length of the entire report
University Writing Center, George Mason University)

12. Why are abstracts important?
They give the reader the idea of what the report / article contains.
They are needed for keyword searches in electronic databases.

13. What should I include in the abstract?
A clear concise summary of the entire report (not more than one page in length)
The aim of the study and a brief justification for the investigation into the problem
A brief description of how the problem was approached and a justification for that approach
A summary of the outcomes and whether they confirm those that had been initially anticipated
The main results, conclusions and recommendations

14. What should I not include?
Lengthy historical summaries and background information
Personal judgements: “I feel this thesis does an excellent job of…”
Overstatements of the results: “This thesis proves…”
Lengthy examples and supporting details
“[…] extraneous information and terms which don’t support the content” (Consortium for International Earth Science Information Network)

15. Qualities of a good abstract
Provide essential message (thesis, findings, important names, conclusion)
Non-technical style
Can be used independently of the main document
Does not contain personal judgments
Contains one or more well developed paragraphs
No new information (information not included in the report)
Present tense? - Be consistent!!!

16. Style Avoid the use of ‘I’ Use short simple, active sentences
Use correct English
Suit style to readers
Ensure it reads fluently – not just a collection of unconnected sentences
Use transitions (however, consequently, therefore, in addition to) to link sentences and make connections clear
Hedge

17. How to write an abstract?
1. Read text to be summarised – get general gist (what’s the purpose etc.)
2. Read again and mark and number important points
3. Write single sentences about each important point
4. Write a sentence to answer ‘what is this text about?’ – try to get an overview of the text’s central idea

18. How to write an abstract?
5. Write first draft by combining overview sentence with important points – avoid repetition
6. Check draft against original – does anything need to be added? Is it accurate and complete?
7. Revise abstract, add transitions and aim for a coherent, unified piece of writing

19. Introduction What is an introduction? Purpose of an introduction
What should I put into the introduction?
Summary

20. What is an introduction?
Usually has two parts:
1. General Statement – to attract the reader’s attention and give background info to the topic
2. Thesis Statement – to state the main topic, may indicate sub-topics, may indicate how the essay is to be organised, usually the last sentence in the introduction

21. Purpose of an introduction
In academic writing, an introduction has four purposes:
1. To introduce the topic
2. To indicate the context through background information
3. To give some indication of the overall plan of the essay
4. To catch the reader’s attention, usually by convincing the reader of its relevance

22. What should I put into the introduction?
Identify the domain and the topic
State the problem - claim, hypothesis, or question - to be investigated
Gives the problem context and significance within the research community
State the objectives and outline the plan
Give a detailed description of what will follow in subsequent chapters
Here, domain refers to the discourse community that is conversing on this same problem, some aspect of the problem investigated, or else is somehow closely related.

23. What should I put into the introduction?
May mention why this research is relevant and important
May elaborate on the method of inquiry, which may include a statement on the ethical aspects of the research
May delineate the scope of the research
May include a definition of terms
Should tell reader what to expect and look for
Check with your supervisor!

24. Summary Introduction should be funnel shaped
Begin with broad statements.
Make these statements more and more specific as the writer narrows the scope of the topic and comes to the problem.
Be sure that the question, hypothesis or claim is one that can be handled in a report of the length specified.
This question, hypothesis or claim is your thesis statement.

25. Conclusion What is a conclusion? Elements of a good conclusion
What should I include in the conclusion
Summary

26. What is a conclusion?
‘ A conclusion is a final result, a judgment reached by reasoning, or the summing up of an essay, book, or other piece of writing’ (ABC of Academic Writing)

27. Elements of a good conclusion
A conclusion should:
Remind the reader of the main points of your argument
Bring ‘closure to the interpretation of the data’ (Leedy, 2001: 291)
Be clear
Be logical
Be credible

28. Elements of a good conclusion
Demonstrate an awareness of the limitations
Discuss the implications of the findings
Offer suggestions for future developments – Remember: A summary alone of what you have done is a weak conclusion
End on a positive note – final sentence should be strong and positive

29. What should I include in the conclusion?
An introduction
A summary of the investigation, the results, and the analysis
A summary of the conclusions drawn from the analysis and discussion of the data / results
An account of whether the research has answered the research question
An assessment of whether the hypothesis or claim has been proved, disproved, or partially proved

30. What should I include in the conclusion?
A discussionion of the implications of the findings
A demonstrable awareness of the limitations of the outcome
Suggestions for future developments – Remember: A summary alone of what you have done is a weak conclusion
A final, strong, positive statement

31. Summary
‘Whatever kind of conclusion you decide on, it should not introduce new topics, apologize for any real or perceived failings in the paper, or merely stop or trail off. Make sure your paper has a clear sense of closure’ (Ebert et al., 1997: 129)

32. Developing and sustaining an argument
What is an argument?
Qualities of a good argument
4 Rules for an argument
Persuasion and truth in academic writing
Some tips

33. The thesis and persuasion: academic argument
‘In college, course assignments often ask you to make a persuasive case in writing. You are asked to convince your reader of your point of view. This form of persuasion, often called academic argument, follows a predictable pattern in writing. After a brief introduction of your topic, you state your point of view on the topic directly and often in one sentence. This sentence is the thesis statement and it serves as a summary of the argument you'll make in the rest of your paper’ (UNC-CH Writing Center, 2004: Online).

34. Developing and sustaining an argument
Your thesis is the basic stand you take, the opinion you express, the point you make about your limited subject. It’s your controlling idea, tying together and giving direction to all other separate elements in your paper. Your primary purpose is to persuade the reader that your thesis is a valid one’ (Skwire, 1976: 3).

35. What is an argument?
‘An argument is the case that someone makes, in a theory or in their writing… you give reasons for saying what you do, and present evidence to support what you say’ (ABC of Academic Writing).

36. Qualities of a good argument
Pursue your argument logically
Do not only describe, but evaluate and interpret also
Argument can be implicit or explicit
Arguments need justifications for their claims

37. 4 Rules for an argument
Leedy (2001: 183) cites Marius (1989) in highlighting 4 rules for an argument
1. ‘state your arguments early in the game’ – present and interpret data
2. ‘provide examples to support any assertion you make’ – makes it stronger and more credible

38. 4 Rules for an argument
3. ‘give the fairest possible treatment of any perspectives different from your own’ – may support or disagree with them
4. ‘ point out the weaknesses of your own argument’ – by doing this you show objectivity as a researcher

39. Persuasion and truth in academic writing
An Argument should be persuasive – don’t sacrifice truth for persuasion
Academic inquiry is a truth-seeking pursuit
facts are distinguished from opinions
subjective truths are distinguished from objective truths
relative truths are distinguished from absolute truths
Claims are qualified
Hedge
Arguments operate along a spectrum/continuum of
Truth< >Persuasion
Questions of subject matter/truth (What is the best solution?)
Questions of audience/persuasion (What will most persuade people?)
From ‘Introduction to Arguments, Scott Hale, University of Oklahoma, at

40. Persuasion and truth in academic writing
The integrity of the conclusions reached in an academic essay or report is based on its honest pursuit of truth.
Its persuasive quality is based on the quality of its appeals.
Although largely dependent on logic, proof, and method, academic texts do appeal to the reader’s emotions and regard for authority as well as to reason.

41. Some tips
Establish your argument in the introduction - in a thesis statement.
Advance your argument by giving evidence.
Do not reiterate evidence already provided, but refer back to something you have already stated.
Present counter arguments and explain both the strengths and weaknesses of the arguments – arguments should be balanced.

42. Some tips
Concede points, even when you know that such a concession weakens your argument. The goal is not to be right, but to explore the question honestly
Qualify your statements
Expose questions that your opinion begs
Your concluding argument should be strong and positive

43. Useful websites http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/bizwrite/abstracts.html
ABC of Academic Writing
Literacy Education Online: Writing Abstracts
Writing Abstracts: Guidelines for Metadata Development

44. Useful websites Summaries: An Introduction – University of Victoria
Writing Summaries – Colorado State University

45. Final Words
Leave everything aside for a few days and come back with a fresh mind
Allow sufficient time for editing