2. Feedback on writing- Click on the sound icon on each slide and follow along…make sure your speakers are on

3. The Paper Read my longer memo on writing Writing and dribbling First paragraph and last paragraph Poorly developed ideas make me crazy You have got to care about your work…or not

4. Spewing Did you have anyone read this Trite “I”…”I”…” Transitions Paragraphs Appropriate material issues- you are professionals so no cursing or questionable language

5. Poor first sentence … The following is the information I found ore informative from the book…..

6. To be a successful e-retailer you really need to offer something that people will have a reason to support, a way to get them what they need, and a process that will make your company profitable and worth coming back to for your customers.

7. E-Retailers today have one goal in mind: increase site traffic, but how? This question has plagued the minds of e- retailers since the beginning of online shopping. Jacyln Easton has a few web traffic secrets to attract and retain customers.

8. E-Retailers struggle daily to get noticed and increase their web traffic. The answers to their problems are there, they just need to look in the right location and learn how to implement the ideas that are available.

9. YO The goal is to impress me or anyone else who reads this. Do you really want to be mediocre…well wake up and do all your work as if you are proud of it