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1 Peer Editing Head 2 sheets of paper; SUBJECT: Peer Editing Essay #2.
Take out your green, Argumentative Rubric.

2 The Bean Trees is the first novel by American writer Barbara Kingsolver, published in 1988 and reissued in It was followed by the sequel Pigs in Heaven. The protagonist of the novel is named Taylor Greer, a native ofKentucky. She sets out to leave home travel west, and finds herself inOklahoma near Cherokee territory. As Taylor stops in the town, a woman suddenly approaches, leaves a small child, and leaves with no further explanation. Not knowing what else to do, Taylor decides to care for the child. The novel traces the experiences of Taylor and the child, whom Taylor names Turtle. Covering Turtle's early childhood, the story includes a colorful cast of characters: Lou Ann, her roommate; Esperanza and Estevan, a Guatemalancouple; and Mattie, the owner of "Jesus Is Lord Used Tires".

3 Bean Trees by Barbara Kingsolver
“In a world as wrong as this one, all we can do is make things as right as we can.”  “There were two things about Mama. One is she always expected the best out of me. And the other is that then no matter what I did, whatever I came home with, she acted like it was the moon I had just hung up in the sky and plugged in all the stars. Like I was that good.”  “I had decided early on that if I couldn’t dress elegant, I’d dress memorable.”  “It's terrible to lose somebody, but it's also true that some people never have anybody to lose, and I think that's got to be so much worse.” 

4 The Poisonwood Bible (1998), by Barbara Kingsolver, is a bestselling novel about a missionary family, the Prices, who in 1959 move from the U.S. state ofGeorgia to the village of Kilanga in the Belgian Congo, close to the Kwilu River. (The nearest town, an impossibly long journey away, is Bulungu.) The Prices' story is narrated in turns by the five women of the family: Orleanna, the long-suffering wife of Baptist missionary Nathan Price, and their four daughters: Rachel, Leah, Adah, and Ruth May. As the Congolese villagers are seen through the eyes of the growing daughters, the view changes. At first, they appear as ridiculous savages. But as the girls mature, the villagers become fully fleshed-out human beings, immersed in a complex and sophisticated culture. Nathan's lack of responsiveness to this culture wears out his family's welcome, but he refuses to leave. Only after a series of misfortunes—culminating in the death of Ruth May—do the women leave Nathan Price to his folly.

5 The Poisonwood Bible by Barbara Kingsolver
“Don’t try to make life a mathematics problem with yourself in the center and everything coming out equal. When you’re good, bad things can still happen. And if you’re bad, you can still be lucky.”  “Listen. Slide the weight from your shoulders and move forward. You are afraid you might forget, but you never will. You will forgive and remember.”  “Everything you're sure is right can be wrong in another place. ”  “I’ve seen how you can’t learn anything when you’re trying to look like the smartest person in the room.” 

6 Trash, by Andy Mulligan In an unnamed Third World country, in the not-so-distant future, three “dumpsite boys” make a living picking through the mountains of garbage on the outskirts of a large city.  One unlucky-lucky day, Raphael finds something very special and very mysterious. So mysterious that he decides to keep it, even when the city police offer a handsome reward for its return. That decision brings with it terrifying consequences, and soon the dumpsite boys must use all of their cunning and courage to stay ahead of their pursuers. It’s up to Raphael, Gardo, and Rat—boys who have no education, no parents, no homes, and no money—to solve the mystery and right a terrible wrong. Andy Mulligan has written a powerful story about unthinkable poverty—and the kind of hope and determination that can transcend it. With twists and turns, unrelenting action, and deep, raw emotion, Trash is a heart-pounding, breath-holding novel.

7 Trash by andy mulligan "With the right key you can bust the door wide open. Because nobody's going to open it for you."  "I learned perhaps more than any university could ever teach me. I learned that the world revolves around money. There are values and virtues and morals; there are relationships and trust and love---and all of that is important. Money, however, is more important and it is dripping all the time, like precious water. Some drink deep; others thirst. Without money, you shrivel and die. The absence of money is drought in which nothing can grow. Nobody knows the value of water until they've lived in a dry, dry place---like Behala. So many people, waiting for the rain."

8 Navy Seal Dogs, by Mike Ritland
Trident K9 Warriors gave readers an inside look at the Navy SEALteams' elite K9 warriors—who they are, how they are trained, and the extreme missions they undertake to save lives. From detecting explosives to eliminating the bad guys, these powerful dogs are also some of the smartest and highest skilled working animals on the planet. Mike Ritland's job is to train them.

9 Navy Seal Dogs by mike ritland
Trident K9 Warriors gave readers an inside look at the Navy SEALteams' elite K9 warriors—who they are, how they are trained, and the extreme missions they undertake to save lives. From detecting explosives to eliminating the bad guys, these powerful dogs are also some of the smartest and highest skilled working animals on the planet. Mike Ritland's job is to train them.

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11 Chew on this by Eric Schlosser & Charles Wilson
“And workers who needed to go to the bathroom weren't allowed to take a break. They were forced to pee right on the slaughterhouse floor, near meat that people would soon be eating.”  FROM THE AUTHOR… “The United States now has more prison inmates than full-time farmers.” “Twenty years ago, teenage boys in the United States drank twice as much milk as soda; now they drink twice as much soda as milk.”

12 The Statistical Probability of Love at First Sight, by Jennifer E
The Statistical Probability of Love at First Sight, by Jennifer E. Smith Four minutes changes everything. Hadley Sullivan 17 misses her flight at JFK airport, is late to her father's second wedding in London with never-met stepmother. Hadley meets the perfect boy. Oliver is British, sits in her row. A long night on the plane passes in a blink, but the two lose track in arrival chaos. Can fate bring them together again?

13 The Statistical Probability of LOVE at first sight by Eric Schlosser & Charles Wilson
“It's not the changes that will break your heart; it's that tug of familiarity.” “Who would have guessed that four minutes could change everything?”  “Is it possible not to ever know your type-not to even know you have a type-until quite suddenly you do?”  “There’s always a gap between the burn and the sting of it, the pain and the realization.”

14 Peer Editing Head 2 sheets of paper; SUBJECT: Peer Editing Essay #2
Write your name on the back of the green score sheet. On the first sheet of paper: Write peer’s name and period. Write topic of paper. Read the essay. Score and reasoning for each: Purpose, Focus, and Organization (2-3 sentence response) Evidence and Elaboration (2-3 sentence response) Conventions of Standard English (1 sentence response) Switch papers with your shoulder partner and repeat for the second peer.


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