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1 Monday- Bell Ringer #8 The writer is considering revising the preceding part of this sentence (“At the end of the ‘Golden Lane,’ as the event was also called,”) to read as follows: At the end of the parade, If the writer did this, the essay would primarily lose: F. an indication that Edna Gellhorn preferred the term “Golden Lane” to the term “walkless-talkless parade.” G. a possible point of confusion, as the proposed revision eliminates a term that was not explained. H. another historical detail about the parade described in the preceding paragraph. J. details that help establish the time and place of the essay. The best answer is H because the phrase "Golden Lane" is a historical detail that informs the reader that Gellhorn's "silent parade" had been given a special name. The best answer is NOT F because there is no evidence in the essay that suggests Gellhorn preferred any name for her "silent parade." The best answer is NOT G. If the word parade were substituted for the term "Golden Lane," the reader would lose nothing more than another historical detail. This change would not confuse readers because either way, they would still understand that the sentence referred to Gellhorn's "silent parade." The best answer is NOT J because the term "Golden Lane" reveals nothing about time and place. Those elements have already been established earlier in the essay.

2 Today: We are working in our groups to read Act 2 of The Crucible.
In each group, there should be a character list. Quickly find out which part you are reading.

3 As You Read: Fill in the Freytag Pyramid
(You picked it up last week- if you lost it, look in the Extra Copies Bin) Look at page 117 to help you fill in the chart. Some places will be left blank until Act III and IV. Pay close attention to the character of Mary Warren. Why is she an important character? How does her attitude differ in the house compared to the courtroom? Note this! It will help with your writing prompt!! Once you have finished Act II, create a thesis and write one good quote for the Writing Prompt on page 118. (HW)

4 Writing Prompt: page 118 Create a thesis and write one good quote for the Writing Prompt on page 118. The important minor character of Mary Warren is more fully developed in Act II. She represents the position of girls and young woman in Salem Village. Compare her role in the Proctor household to her role in the courtroom. How is Miller using her as emblematic (a symbol) of the girls’ hysteria and their position in Salem society?

5 ALL electronics need to be PUT AWAY!
Tuesday- Bell Ringer #9 A. NO CHANGE B. a live scene C. a live scene was D. a live scene that The best answer is B because it provides an appropriate sentence structure and offers the clearest wording for this sentence. Mark your answer on the board. Turn in Writing Prompt from yesterday (on podium). ALL electronics need to be PUT AWAY! The best answer is B because it provides an appropriate sentence structure and offers the clearest wording for this sentence. The other choices have faulty structures resulting in unclear and ambiguous statements. The best answer is NOT A because the sentence structure is awkward. The phrase "a live scene presented by silent costumed participants" modifies and describes the "living tableau." This choice attempts to make this description into a dependent clause but fails to do so properly. The best answer is NOT C because it creates a sentence that is a comma splice. The best answer is NOT D because the wording makes this sentence unclear. It illogically reads as though the "live scene," and not the "costumed participants," did the presenting.

6 Today... We are looking at an important scene from Act II
In your group, there is a card with your group’s chart name on it. Find the chart and fill it out. Answer all the questions in the boxes with amazing examples! We will share as a whole group in 15 minutes

7 As We Watch: Take notes on the The Crucible: 1996 Movie box.
Answer the questions at the end. Make sure you have complete sentences and good examples!!

8 As You Finish: Write down all the characters we have came into contact with and what their role is in the story.

9 Wednesday: Bell Ringer
#10: F. NO CHANGE G. in that H. that J. OMIT the underlined portion. The best answer is F because it offers the most precise wording for this sentence. Mark your answer on the board. ALL electronics need to be PUT AWAY! The best answer is F because it offers the most precise wording for this sentence. The best answer is NOT G because the meaning of the sentence is ambiguous. The phrase "states in that women could vote," does not clarify the writer's intended meaning that the women who wore white were representing states where women already had the right to vote. The best answer is NOT H because the meaning of the sentence is ambiguous. The phrase "states that women could vote," does not clarify the writer's intended meaning that the women who wore white were representing states where women already had the right to vote. The best answer is NOT J because the meaning of the sentence is ambiguous. The phrase "states women could vote," does not clarify the writer's intended meaning that the women who wore white were representing states where women already had the right to vote.

10 There Are 17 Characters: So, if you volunteer today, you should be off the hook tomorrow. Everyone will read today or tomorrow. Volunteers first, then I will select someone.

11 Today: We are going to start Act III.
BEFORE you start reading, answer the Before Reading Questions on worksheet 2.12. As you listen, make sure to make notes about the trial. What is interesting? What happens?

12 After reading: Answer the After Reading questions.
Get into groups of 5 and come see me. I will be giving you one of the prompts to create a skit from. Have fun with this! You will have today and part of tomorrow to work on them. Then you will present them to the class.

13 ALL electronics need to be PUT AWAY!
Thursday: Bell Ringer #11: A. NO CHANGE B. the passing delegates to remind the men C. them as a way to remind them D. remind them The best answer is B because it is the only choice that makes it clear that the women "held out manacled hands" to "the passing delegates." In the other choices, the pronoun them has no clear referent. Mark your answer on the board. ALL electronics need to be PUT AWAY! The best answer is B because it is the only choice that makes it clear that the women "held out manacled hands" to "the passing delegates." In the other choices, the pronoun them has no clear referent. The best answer is NOT A because the pronoun them has no clear referent. The best answer is NOT C because the pronoun them has no clear referent. The best answer is NOT D because the pronoun them has no clear referent.

14 ALL electronics need to be PUT AWAY!
Friday: Bell Ringer #12: F. NO CHANGE G. tiers stood a woman H. tiers stood a woman, J. tiers stood, a woman The best answer is G because no punctuation is necessary, other than the period at the end of the sentence. Mark your answer on the board. ALL electronics need to be PUT AWAY! The best answer is G because no punctuation is necessary, other than the period at the end of the sentence. The best answer is NOT F because the comma before the verb stood is unnecessary. The best answer is NOT H because the comma after the noun woman is unnecessary. The best answer is NOT J because the comma after the verb stood is unnecessary

15 Today: We are going to finish Act III.
Answer the After Reading questions. Get into groups of 5 and come see me. I will be giving you one of the prompts to create a skit from. Have fun with this! You will have about 20 minutes to prepare. Then you will present them to the class.

16 Today: We are listening to Act IV of The Crucible.
Please prove you are following along by using a bookmark, finger, or index card. Pay attention to how the relationship between Elizabeth and Proctor changes.


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