1. WRITING A RHETORICAL ANALYSIS ESSAY
The Scarlet Letter
Passage 1

2. The Rhetorical Analysis
All essays are questions answer them.
There are two essential questions that must be answered on the rhetorical analysis essay.

3. THE QUESTIONS There are two questions that need to be answered
Question 1: tone/purpose/theme (TPT)
Question 2: Prompt Question (attitude)

4. The Scarlet Letter Prompt
In the following passage from The Scarlet Letter, the narrator introduces the reader to the Puritan community of the novel. Read the passage carefully. Then write an essay analyzing how the narrator’s description of the Puritans and their community suggests his attitude toward them.

5. Big Question On top of prompt write T/P/T:
Tone: Read the passage-at the top write T and provide five tone words
Purpose: After reading passage-what was his purpose for writing this-to expose, indict, critique, judge (verb)
Theme-tie it to an abstract noun-is it to expose the Puritans for the hypocrites they are and thereby reveal human nature?
Tone: critical, indict full, negative, harsh
Purpose: to expose, to condemn, to judge
Theme: abstract noun tied to human nature (LoveAngerHatePeaceLoyaltyIntegrityPrideCourageDeceitHonestyTrustCompassionBraveryMiseryChildhoodKnowledgePatriotismFriendshipBrillianceTruthCharityJusticeFaithKindnessPleasureLibertyFreedomDelightDespairHopeAweCalmJoy

6. Analysis of TONE Tone is the emotional voice of the author
Tone is expressed through specific and strong adjectives
List four specific adjectives that speak to Hawthorne’s tone of voice towards the Puritans.

7. Analysis of AUTHOR’S PURPOSE
Author’s purpose is the goal or intent of the writer’s written work
Author’s purpose is always expressed through a specific and strong verb
Look at your tone words find verbs (doing words) that reflect the meaning of your adjectives
What does a critical voice do?

8. Analysis of THEME STATEMENT
Theme is a universal statement about the human condition
Theme is expressed with a strong verb and an abstract noun
Think about Hawthorne’s message about the Puritans and their life choices.

9. Big Question Write your TPT statement. Circle your TPT statement.
Highlight all adjectives.

10. Initial TPT statement
Hawthorne’s narrator in The Scarlet Letter indicts an intolerant Puritan community.

11. Revising your TPT statement
Count how many words you have until your first adjective
That’s your first answer
How strong are your adjectives

12. The Big Question: Revising your TPT statement
Block your first verb.
That’s your second answer

13. TPT statement format
The format you have to use: adj. and adj., author+title, verb+abstract noun
Accusatory and critical, Hawthorne in The Scarlet Letter indicts the Puritans for their intolerance.
Other format: Author, adj. and adj., title verb+statement
Hawthorne, accusatory and critical, in The Scarlet Letter indicts the Puritans for their intolerance.

14. TPT Statement addresses the BIG Question
Circle your theme/main idea/big idea statement.
Has to have an abstract noun

15. Does your answer to the Big Question look like this?
Rewrite first sentence so it addresses TPT
Using this recipe:
Adjective and Adjective+, +title author+, +verb+theme statement Or
Author+, adjective and adjective, + title+ verb + theme statement

16. Little Question: what the prompt is asking for
Where do you address narrator’s attitude towards the Puritans? (a good start is an adjective)

17. Little Question
Use the word voice and answer the question what is Hawthorne’s attitude towards the Puritans?

18. Always address the question(s) listed in the prompt.
Little Question
Always address the question(s) listed in the prompt.
What is the narrator’s attitude toward the Puritan community?

19. Attitude Look up synonyms for attitude
Approach, outlook, manner, point of view, perspective, posture, position

20. Attitude is not TONE Tone is the emotional position of the author
Attitude is the author’s perspective, point of view ,opinion toward the subject (characterization)

21. Rewrite Sentence 1 an appositive or absolute Adjective clause
A strong answer to the prompt question about attitude

22. Introductory paragraph: answers Big and Little Question
Accusatory and critical, Hawthorne in The Scarlet Letter indicts the Puritans for their intolerance. The narrator’s scathing voice augments the caustic irony which operates to critique Puritan zealotry.

23. TALLY ASSESSMENT Trade papers
Write tally at the top of the paper and sign your name at the bottom

24. Circle the first sentence
Highlight the twin adjectives
Examine for correctness
Assign one tally or write no tone adjectives

25. Circle the Verb Examine the strength of the verb
Expose, criticize, judge, evaluate, highlight, augments
Assign a tally or write lacks verb

26. Underline the THEME/BIG IDEA
Make sure there is an abstract noun (is there a negative abstract noun)
Intolerance, oppression, control, mean-spiritedness
Assign one tally or write lacks theme

27. Second Sentence Highlight an adjective
Assign a tally or write no detail/specificity

28. Second Sentence
Circle the word attitude or synonym (you must have a stem of the question)
Assign tally or write no stem

29. Second Sentence
Underline the answer to the question-What is Hawthorne’s attitude towards the Puritans?
Assign tally or write no answer.

30. Scoring
6=A 5=B
4=C 3=D
2-1=F

31. Tally for Introduction
Sentence 1 or TPT=adjective phrase or appositive (1 point), strong verb (1 point) and an abstract noun addressing Big Question (I point)=3 points
Sentence 2=Thesis it addresses the prompt
Adjective (voice)(1 point)
Stem of the question (voice, attitude, outlook, perspective, position)( 1 point)
Tie it to rhetoric or big idea (1 point)=3 points

32. Supporting Paragraph Essays are idea driven not evidence driven
You did not create the evidence, so you will not be assessed on it.

33. Circle your supporting paragraph
Underline your first sentence
Highlight only your ideas in one color
Highlight evidence in another
Adjectives
Strong verbs (descriptive not linking verbs)
Abstract noun
How many answers did you have?
Minimum of 5 or 1 per sentence.
You only assess by the commentary

34. Sentence 1 Initial sentence 1:
Highlight the sentence
Circle the adjective
Underline verb
Circle abstract noun
Make a note of what you are missing.
Initial sentence 1:
The irony evident in paragraph one sets the tone for the rest of the passage.
*missing adjective, verb could be stronger, where is my abstract noun?
Accusatory and critical, Hawthorne in The Scarlet Letter indicts the Puritans for their intolerance. The narrator’s scathing voice augments the caustic irony which operates to critique a fanatical society.
Revised: The sardonic diction evident from paragraph one sets the damning judgment of the intransigence of the Puritan community.

35. Accusatory and critical, Hawthorne in The Scarlet Letter indicts the Puritans for their intolerance. The narrator’s scathing voice augments the caustic irony which operates to critique a fanatical society.
The sardonic diction evident from paragraph one sets the damning judgment of the intransigent Puritan community. One sees the town’s “good people” gathered; one anticipates some execution for some awful crime, perhaps a homicide. However, the narrator lets us know that “early severity” of the Puritans could be triggered by something as trivial as a sluggish bond-servant or an undutiful child, hardly the insidious crimes one expects from their stern, rigid physiognomies. It is clear that the narrator arraigns the Puritans for their intolerance. As a result, he makes us question whether these people are “good people” indeed. Their rigidity makes them an extension of a harsh penal code which they should reject but instead embrace. Here are a people who have crossed an ocean, severed ties with all they know in order to achieve religious freedom, but instead have become a medium of oppression-where humanity is intolerable and the “mildest and severest acts of public discipline are alike.” Hawthorne chides the Puritans for their narrow-mindedness because he knows that it will bring about their own demise.

36. Body How dense is your body?
Highlight the evidence and underline commentary (your ideas)
How many circles do you have?
Commentary should have a minimum of three (they should follow each of your evidence)
Your commentary is the only thing you are being assessed on.

37. Last Sentence Was your last sentence evidence rich or commentary rich?
Circle your last sentence
Highlight the adjective
Circle the verb
Underline abstract noun
Make a note of what you are missing
Was your last sentence evidence rich or commentary rich?
There should be no evidence in your last sentence.

38. REVISE Using this Structure
First sentence-adjective, verb, big idea about rhetorical device
Body-evidence and commentary (the effect or what is being built by the rhetorical device)
Ending sentence-adjective, verb, big idea about rhetorical device

39. Conclusion Paragraph
1st sentence-restatement of thesis (Little Question)-You have to paraphrase it.
Frame TPT-restructure
Ender-insight Or
Frame TPT-where you address part of it
Thesis –restate
Ender-bring back to big idea

40. Sample Intro. and Conc.
Introduction
Conclusion