1. Simple logical Paragraph Writing 1.Introducing a paragraph through talk 2.Breaking a paragraph down. 3.Looking at the parts with simple planning. 4.Fill in the parts with simple sentencing. 5.Independent Task

2. Break it down... 1. On my weekend Firstly, I will / (past verb) Then, I will / Finally, I will / 2. I’m good at / I dislike … because … Next, … Additionally, …

3. Oranges I love oranges (as they are convenient, nutritious & delicious/ for a number of reasons). One reason I love oranges is because they are so convenient. They are quick to peel and you don’t need a bowl or a spoon so there is no mess to clean up. I also like oranges because they are nutritious. Oranges are high in vitamin C, which can keep you from being sick. They are also a good source of nutrients shown to prevent skin cancer and even wrinkles. But the best reason for eating oranges is because they are so delicious. The sweet, fresh taste of ripe orange makes it a perfect snack. And unlike a candy bar or potato chips, an orange makes you feel good when you eat it. I think that oranges are quite possibly the perfect food.

4. Oranges I love oranges (as they are convenient, nutritious & delicious/ for a number of reasons). One reason I love oranges is because they are so convenient. They are quick to peel and you don’t need a bowl or a spoon so there is no mess to clean up. I also like oranges because they are nutritious. Oranges are high in vitamin C, which can keep you from being sick. They are also a good source of nutrients shown to prevent skin cancer and even wrinkles. But the best reason for eating oranges is because they are so delicious. The sweet, fresh taste of ripe orange makes it a perfect snack. And unlike a candy bar or potato chips, an orange makes you feel good when you eat it. I think that oranges are quite possibly the perfect food.

5. ( Brainstorm)– someone or something you love... Oranges convenient nutritious Delicious No mess Vit C nutrient Sweet snack Easy to peel Feel good V other

6. Example (Simple) Paragraph Busan is a great place to live. The local cuisine is incredible. It includes spicy street food, raw seafood, and smoky pigs feet. It is also a beautiful place, with majestic mountains and warm, sunny beaches. And the people are so friendly. Complete strangers often stop to chat with foreigners or ask them if they need help. This has happened to me. These are just some of the reasons I think Busan is a fantastic place to live.

7. Break it down... Write the Topic sentence.(main idea) _______________________________________ 3 main supporting ideas: (link to topic) 1. 2. 3. Conclusion (summary, argument(opinion) or connector to next paragraph) – What type was this?

8. The Writing Process... Brainstorming and narrowing the topic. (write topic sentence) Develop an outline. Rough draft. Editing (Peer review) Second draft. Final Copy.

9. Topic Sentences Answers the question “what is this P. about?” Usually the first sentence of a paragraph. Does not give specific details. But is not too general either. Contains a topic and a controlling idea. Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness. Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics. Subject, verb and usually a complement.

10. Topic Sentences – Topic and Controlling Idea Convenience foods are easy to prepare. The native foods of America’s immigrant population are reflected in American Cooking. The average American teenager consumes enormous quantities of junk food.

11. Exercise. Circle and Underline. Driving on freeways requires nerves of steel. The spread of AIDS can be slowed by educating the public. Many religious rules developed from the health needs of ancient times. A major problem for international students is taking essay examinations. Spectacular beaches make Puerto Rico a tourist paradise.

12. Selecting a good topic sentence. Bilingual dictionaries can help non-native learner in two important ways. In a bilingual dictionary, the information is presented in two different languages. ----------- Fossils are the remains of plants or animals that died a long time ago. There are numerous techniques that scientists use to discover the true age of a fossil. ----------- The cost of living is rising. Rising living costs can be attributed to a number of different factors.

13. Pick the bad topic sentence(s). Make sure it has a main subject and controlling idea. 1.Teaching can be used in many different situations. 2.Teaching has changed enormously in the last 10 years. 3.Different teaching methods can appeal to different people. 4.Teaching has been around for a long time. Pick one (1-3) ABOVE and tell your partner what the paragraph will be about.

14. Write topic sentences for these A paragraph about:- The possible causes of student misbehaviour in class. The suicide rate amongst young Koreans. Teenage promiscuity and drinking. Discuss 1 using (transitions and examples)...

15. Topic Sentence – Goldilocks Effect Too general: American food is terrible. Too specific: American food is tasteless and greasy because Americans use too many canned, frozen, and pre-packaged foods and because everything is fried in oil or butter. Just Right: American food is tasteless and greasy. Too many ideas: San Francisco is famous for its temperate climate, its many tourist attractions, and its cosmopolitan atmosphere. Just Right: San Francisco is famous for its cosmopolitan atmosphere.

16. Conclusions A concluding sentence serves 2 main purposes: 1.It signals the end of the paragraph. 2. Logical conclusion by: a.It summarises the main points of the paragraph or restating the main idea. b.Offering a suggestion, opinion or prediction. End of paragraph signals: CommaNo comma Finally, As a result, In conclusion, Indeed, In summary, In brief, Therefore, In short, Thus, We can see that... It is clear that... These examples show that... There can be no doubt that... The evidence suggests that...

17. Typical Paragraph Review Topic Sentence: - first sentence of the paragraph - states the subject of the paragraph Supporting Sentences: - there should be at least three main supporting ideas. - all supporting sentences should refer back to the topic sentence; if it does not connect to the topic sentence, it belongs in a separate paragraph. -These three main supporting sentences should have supporting evidence or examples. Concluding Sentence: - last sentence in the paragraph - It signals the end of the paragraph, gives a logical conclusion or in larger essays usually provides a thesis statement. Cats are the perfect animal. Not only are they cute and fluffy, but they also love to play. Feeding and caring for a cat is easy, because they are not picky eaters and they do not need to be walked. Cats are extremely loving, and they are very loyal companions. In every way, a cat is a wonderful animal to have as a pet. NB* This is still not perfect … Can you tell why?

18. Some Formatting Issues Topic Sentences, Body & Conclusions. Formatting Does: Indent for the first line of the paragraph. Only indent the first line. Have sentences grouped together without line ends. Use capitals, periods and other grammatical conventions. Doc Naming – Name_Para(number) Eg. 09876543_Damian_Par1

19. Not like this... My hometown brisbane is known for its relaxed atmosphere, its climate and favourable location. Firstly, brisbane has a relaxed atmosphere. This is due to the locals attitudes to work and leisure time. Also there are many outdoor eating and recreational areas. For example, the Riverside has cafes and bars, etc. Its climate is also fabulous. People enjoying swimming and outdoor activities year round. But you can do these things in Sydney too if you want to visit other places. Brisbane is located close to the Sunshine coast and gold Coast. It has a favourable location being so close to them and these cities are popular with tourists. Australia is a great place to visit.

20. Transitions – connecting ideas. 1. I met a girl _____ fell in love. ________ we got bored and broke up. 2&3. My ex-girlfriend was great. _________ my new partner is great too, ________ she’s different to my ex. 4&5. My ex-girlfriend was great. ________ she cheated a lot. ___________ she kissed my best friend once! 6. There are many elements to good relationship, ________________ unity, coherence and cohesion are essential in finding love. 6. She was always doing nice things for me. __________________ she often brought me lunch when I was too busy. __________ she was wonderful. 7. _______________, I should never have broken up with her. 8. Tell your partner an anecdote or something that has happened recently using time sequencing...

21. Independent Task Write a paragraph about the syllabus task Why you chose that subject? What were the main considerations? What are the main characteristics to consider? An evaluation of your syllabus.