1. Inverted Pyramid Journalism: How to Write News Articles

2. What is the Inverted Pyramid?
The structure of writing used in journalism that describes how news information should be delivered to the reader
Readers want to know what happened, but don’t have time to read entire article so you give the most important or interesting details first and less important info dribbles down into body of article

4. SISTER AND BROTHER KILLED WHEN BUS, SNOWPLOW CRASH
Example #1
SISTER AND BROTHER KILLED WHEN BUS, SNOWPLOW CRASH
ALBIN, WYOMING — A snowplow slammed into a school bus on an icy road Wednesday, killing two siblings and injuring their older brother and two other people.
The crash occurred just before 8 a.m. about eight miles north of the ranching community of Albin, according to Wyoming State Patrol trooper Perry Jones. The bus had made only one stop before the crash.
An 11-year-old girl died at the scene and her 8-year-old brother died later at a hospital, authorities said. Their 18-year-old brother suffered minor injuries.
The bus driver was in serious condition with chest and abdominal injuries, and the plow driver was treated for minor injuries and released.
The K-12 school the children and the teenager attend canceled classes at midday.
Writing in this story is simple and direct.
Note attribution of information in second and third paragraphs.
Story is not written in a narrative form. It doesn’t begin at the beginning and end at the end. Rather it presents information in order of its importance.
Note the short sentences and short paragraphs.

5. Example #2
TEENS SENTENCED AFTER PLOTTING GUN ATTACK ON SCHOOL CLEVELAND, OHIO — Two teenagers have been sentenced to a minimum of a year in custody for plotting an attack at their high school.
The two boys, 15 and 16, had pleaded guilty to conspiracy to commit murder at South High School. They still could be held until age 21, the maximum penalty under juvenile law, but under the sentence pronounced Tuesday, the state Department of Youth Services has the discretion to release them after a year.
The plot was discovered when a student told school officials a group of teenagers planned to open fire on Oct. 29, homecoming day.
Two other students have pleaded guilty to inducing panic. One received a minimum six-month sentence. Sentencing for the other was delayed pending completion of a background report.
Inverted pyramid, rather than narrative style observed.
One possible flaw in this story is that the second sentence of the second paragraph is very long. How would you shorten it?
This story lacks direct attribution because the reporter was on the scene to observe the events.
Why does the story not give the names of the boys?

6. Tips for writing the lead

7. Tips….
The Five W’s and H: Before writing a lead, decide which aspect of the story – who, what, when, where, why, how – is most important. You should emphasize those aspects in your lead. Wait to explain less important aspects until the second or third sentence.
Conflict: Good stories have conflict. So do many good leads.
Specificity: Though you are essentially summarizing information in most leads, try to be specific as possible. If your lead is too broad, it won’t be informative or interesting.
Brevity: Readers want to know why the story matters to them and they won’t wait long for the answer. Leads are often one sentence, sometimes two. Generally, they are 25 to 30 words and should rarely be more than 40. This is somewhat arbitrary, but it’s important – especially for young journalists – to learn how to deliver information concisely.
Active sentences: Strong verbs will make your lead lively and interesting. Passive constructions, on the other hand, can sound dull and leave out important information, such as the person or thing that caused the action. Incomplete reporting is often a source of passive leads.
Audience and context: Take into account what your reader already knows. Remember that in today’s media culture, most readers become aware of breaking news as it happens. If you’re writing for a print publication the next day, your lead should do more than merely regurgitate yesterday’s news.
Honesty: A lead is an implicit promise to your readers. You must be able to deliver what you promise in your lead.

8. Types of Leads (see your handout)
Summary Lead -tells the basics of Big 6
Anecdotal Lead- useful in features; use one person’s story as a leading example for the story
Direct Address Lead- Using “you” to directly address reader
Descriptive Lead- descriptive/ uses images
Quotation Lead- start with a quote
Question Lead- raise a question of your reader
Humor Lead- play on words, joke, etc…
Contrast Lead- show an event/person by telling what it’s not
Delayed Lead- create suspense with a delay
Big Idea Lead- the goal of your story
Examples:

9. Integrating quotes (from your interviews)

10. You can QUOTE me on that
Quotes make a story more believable; they are evidence that can support your topic.

11. Direct Quotes
Quotes printed word for word exactly as the author wrote them are direct quotes. These words appear inside quotation marks. The attribution word appears outside the quotation marks. The attribution is the phrase that tells who said it - where you got the information.

12. Examples of Direct Quotes
“I am thrilled to be representing the great State of Texas at the Free Spirit Conference,” Joe Mama, newspaper adviser said. “I owe it all to my talented students.”
“I’m just glad I didn’t have to spend any more time with my adviser than I did,” Casey Deeya said.

13. Indirect Quotes
Information from a source which is not made up of the author’s exact words is not placed inside quotation marks. This is an indirect quote, which is a paraphrase or a summary of the meaning of the direct quotation.
Indirect quotes are used to:
Express a fact stated by the source
Clarify a quote that is too long, confusing or dull
Condense the ideas of several direct quotes

14. Partial Quotes
Sometimes it might work better to use a portion of a quote to convey the information than to use an entire quote. To do this, put only the quoted words inside quotation marks.
Use partial quotes when you need to use a speaker’s exact words but the entire direct quote might be too long or too confusing for the reader.

15. Example of a Partial Quote
In his novel, Styles at LCC, author Harry Skaulp states that spiked hair is a “part of our cultural heritage, not merely a symbol of rebellion,” adding that he thinks nose piercing should be mandatory.

16. Punctuating Quotations
The author’s exact words go inside the quotation marks: “I am super, duper cool.”
The end punctuation (period, question mark, exclamation point) goes inside the last quotation mark. “Give me the damn money!”
When the attribution comes after a direct quote, use a comma to separate the quote from the attribution. “Here it is,” replied Bob.
If a question mark relates to the sentence and not the quote, place it at the end of the sentence outside the quotation marks: What kind of moron says, “I am super, duper cool”?

17. Punctuating Quotations
Use single quotation marks to indicate a quote inside a quote. “And so I told her, ‘Fix your own tire, Grandma!’”
Leave off the closing quotation marks at the end of a paragraph if the quote continues in the next paragraph.
If a quote is a complete sentence, begin it with a capital letter. If it’s not, don’t.

18. Punctuating Quotations
Use quotation marks to indicate the title of a smaller work, such as an article, essay, short story, song, poem, or speech.
In his essay, “Potatoes are Yummy,” Joe Smith argues that…
Use italics (or underline) for larger works such as a book, magazine, album, play, film, or long poem.
In her novel, Potatoes are Yucky, Ann Smith argues that…

19. Integrating Quotations
Never just drop a quotation into your paper. Always introduce it and explain it with your own words.
There are three main ways to introduce quotations. These include:

20. 1. Incorporate the quotation into your sentence, punctuating it just as you would if it was not a quotation.
As Bob is being beaten, he hopes he “will become unconscious but [he] can’t.”
Bob appraises Mrs. Harrison derisively, stating that “she looked so complacent, sitting there in her two-hundred dollar chair [. . . ] bought with dough her husband had made overcharging poor hard-working colored people for his incompetent services, that I had a crazy impulse to needle her.”

21. 2. Introduce the quotation by using an attributive tag like he writes, she claims, and so on.
To describe his childlike consciousness, Wright explains, “Each event spoke with a cryptic tongue. And the moments of living slowly revealed their coded meanings.”
After going to Memphis and boarding with Mrs. Moss, Wright wonders, “Was it wise to remain here with a seventeen-year-old girl eager for marriage and a mother equally anxious to have her marry me?”

22. 3. Introduce the quotation by writing a full sentence and a colon to introduce the quotation, which should itself be a full sentence.
Bob’s description of Madge emphasizes her fake appearance: “She was a peroxide blonde with a large-featured, overly made-up face, and she had a large, bright-painted, fleshy mouth.”
Richard Wright explains his reasons for writing: “I was striving for a level of expression that matched those of the novels I read.”

23. What NOT to do….
Never “introduce your quotes” talking in first person:
I interviewed Bob Jones and when asked what he thought, he said, “I don’t care, I just want them to be happy.”