1. RTI: Writing Interventions Jim Wright www.interventioncentral.org

2. Elbow Group Activity: When was your ‘writing breakthrough’ point?
In your group, discuss when each member felt that they reached the ‘breakthrough’ point when they felt they were competent writers.
Be prepared to share your discussion with the larger group.

3. "If all the grammarians in the world were placed end to end, it would be a good thing."
Oscar Wilde

4. Graham, S., & Perin, D. (2007). Writing next: Effective strategies to improve writing of adolescents in middle and high schools – A report to Carnegie Corporation of New York. Washington, DC Alliance for Excellent Education. Retrieved from WritingNext.pdf

5. The Effect of Grammar Instruction as an Independent Activity
“Grammar instruction in the studies reviewed [for the Writing Next report] involved the explicit and systematic teaching of the parts of speech and structure of sentences. The meta-analysis found an effect for this type of instruction for students across the full range of ability, but …surprisingly, this effect was negative…Such findings raise serious questions about some educators’ enthusiasm for traditional grammar instruction as a focus of writing instruction for adolescents….Overall, the findings on grammar instruction suggest that, although teaching grammar is important, alternative procedures, such as sentence combining, are more effective than traditional approaches for improving the quality of students’ writing.” p. 21
Source: Graham, S., & Perin, D. (2007). Writing next: Effective strategies to improve writing of adolescents in middle and high schools – A report to Carnegie Corporation of New York. Washington, DC Alliance for Excellent Education.

6. Domains of writing to be assessed (Robinson & Howell, 2008):
Fluency/Text Generation: Facility in getting text onto paper or typed into the computer. (NOTE: This element can be significantly influenced by student motivation.)
Syntactic Maturity: This skill includes the:
Ability to discern when a word string meets criteria as a complete sentence
Ability to write compositions with a diverse range of sentence structures
Semantic Maturity: Writer’s use of vocabulary of range and sophistication
Source: Robinson, L. K., & Howell, K. W. (2008). Best practices in curriculum-based evaluation & written expression. In A. Thomas & J. Grimes (Eds.), Best practices in school psychology V (pp ). Bethesda, MD: National Association of School Psychologists.

7. Students must learn that writing is a process (plan, write, revise) not a static product.
The Horse in Motion
Eadweard Muybridge, 1904

8. Domains of writing to be assessed (Robinson & Howell, 2008):
5-Step Writing Process: (Items in bold are iterative):
Planning. The student carries out necessary pre-writing planning activities, including content, format, and outline.
Drafting. The student writes or types the composition.
Revision. The student reviews the content of the composition-in-progress and makes changes as needed. After producing an initial written draft, the student considers revisions to content before turning in for a grade or evaluation.
Editing. The student looks over the composition and corrects any mechanical mistakes (capitalization, punctuation, etc.).
Publication: The student submits the composition in finished form.
Source: Robinson, L. K., & Howell, K. W. (2008). Best practices in curriculum-based evaluation & written expression. In A. Thomas & J. Grimes (Eds.), Best practices in school psychology V (pp ). Bethesda, MD: National Association of School Psychologists.

9. Elements of effective writing instruction for adolescents:
Writing Process (Effect Size = 0.82): Students are taught a process for planning, revising, and editing.
Summarizing (Effect Size = 0.82): Students are taught methods to identify key points, main ideas from readings to write summaries of source texts.
Cooperative Learning Activities (‘Collaborative Writing’) (Effect Size = 0.75): Students are placed in pairs or groups with learning activities that focus on collaborative use of the writing process.
Goal-Setting (Effect Size = 0.70): Students set specific ‘product goals’ for their writing and then check their attainment of those self-generated goals.
Source: Graham, S., & Perin, D. (2007). Writing next: Effective strategies to improve writing of adolescents in middle and high schools – A report to Carnegie Corporation of New York. Washington, DC Alliance for Excellent Education. Retrieved from

10. Elements of effective writing instruction for adolescents:
Writing Processors (Effect Size = 0.55): Students have access to computers/word processors in the writing process.
Sentence Combining (Effect Size = 0.50): Students take part in instructional activities that require the combination or embedding of simpler sentences (e.g., Noun-Verb-Object) to generate more advanced, complex sentences.
Prewriting (Effect Size = 0.32): Students learn to select, develop, or organize ideas to incorporate into their writing by participating in structured ‘pre-writing’ activities.
Inquiry Activities (Effect Size = 0.32): Students become actively engaged researchers, collecting and analyzing information to guide the ideas and content for writing assignments.
Source: Graham, S., & Perin, D. (2007). Writing next: Effective strategies to improve writing of adolescents in middle and high schools – A report to Carnegie Corporation of New York. Washington, DC Alliance for Excellent Education. Retrieved from

11. Elements of effective writing instruction for adolescents:
Process Writing (Effect Size = 0.32): Writing instruction is taught in a ‘workshop’ format that “ stresses extended writing opportunities, writing for authentic audiences, personalized instruction, and cycles of writing” (Graham & Perin, 2007; p. 4).
Use of Writing Models (Effect Size = 0.25): Students read and discuss models of good writing and use them as exemplars for their own writing.
Writing to Learn Content (Effect Size = 0.23): The instructor incorporates writing activities as a means to have students learn content material.
Source: Graham, S., & Perin, D. (2007). Writing next: Effective strategies to improve writing of adolescents in middle and high schools – A report to Carnegie Corporation of New York. Washington, DC Alliance for Excellent Education. Retrieved from

12. Writing Skills Checklist

13. Writing ‘Blockers

14. Physical Production of Writing
Problem?
Writing Competency
Sample Intervention Ideas
___Y ___N
Writing Speed. Writes words on the page at a rate equal or nearly equal to that of classmates
Teach keyboarding skills
Allow student to dictate ideas into a tape-recorder and have a volunteer (e.g., classmate, parent, school personnel) transcribe them
Handwriting. Handwriting is legible to most readers
Provide training in handwriting

15. Origins of the Latin Alphabet:Early Greek Alphabet
Boustrophedon: ‘ox trail’: Script alternates between left-to-right and right-to-left
Source:

16. Mechanics & Conventions of Writing
Problem?
Writing Competency
Sample Intervention Ideas
___Y ___N
Grammar & Syntax. Knowledge of grammar (rules governing use of language) and syntax (grammatical arrangement of words in sentences) is appropriate for age and/or grade placement
Teach rules of grammar, syntax
Have students compile individualized checklists of their own common grammar/syntax mistakes; direct students to use the checklist to review work for errors before turning in
Spelling. Spelling skills are appropriate for age and/or grade placement
Have student collect list of own common misspellings; assign words from list to study; quiz student on list items
Have student type assignments and use spell-check

17. "The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and the lightning bug."
Mark Twain

18. "Your manuscript is both good and original
"Your manuscript is both good and original. But the part that is good is not original, and the part that is original is not good."
Samuel Johnson

19. Writing Content Problem? Writing Competency Sample Intervention Ideas
___Y ___N
Vocabulary. Vocabulary in written work is age/grade appropriate
Compile list of key vocabulary and related definitions for subject area; assign words from list to study; quiz student on definitions of list items
Introduce new vocabulary items regularly to class; set up cooperative learning activities for students to review vocabulary
Word Choice. Distinguishes word-choices that are appropriate for informal (colloquial, slang) written discourse vs. formal discourse
Present examples to the class of formal vs. informal word choices
Have students check work for appropriate word choice as part of writing revision process
Audience. Identifies targeted audience for writing assignments and alters written content to match needs of projected audience
Direct students to write a ‘targeted audience profile’ as a formal (early) step in the writing process; have students evaluate the final writing product to needs of targeted audience during the revision process
Plagiarism. Identifies when to credit authors for use of excerpts quoted verbatim or unique ideas taken from other written works
Define plagiarism for students. Use plentiful examples to show students acceptable vs. unacceptable incorporation of others’ words or ideas into written compositions

20. "Nothing is particularly hard if you divide it into small jobs."
Henry Ford

21. Writing Preparation Problem? Writing Competency
Sample Intervention Ideas
___Y ___N
Topic Selection. Independently selects appropriate topics for writing assignments
Have student generate list of general topics that that interest him or her; sit with the student to brainstorm ideas for writing topics that relate to the student’s own areas of interest
Writing Plan. Creates writing plan by breaking larger writing assignments into sub-tasks (e.g., select topic, collect source documents, take notes from source documents, write outline, etc.)
Create generic pre-formatted work plans for writing assignments that break specific types of larger assignments (e.g., research paper) into constituent parts. Have students use these plan outlines as a starting point to making up their own detailed writing plans.
Note-Taking. Researches topics by writing notes that capture key ideas from source material
Teach note-taking skills; have students review note-cards with the teacher as quality check.

22. "When I sit at my table to write, I never know what it’s going to be until I'm under way. I trust in inspiration, which sometimes comes and sometimes doesn't. But I don't sit back waiting for it. I work every day."
Alberto Moravia

23. Writing Production & Revision
Problem?
Writing Competency
Sample Intervention Ideas
___Y ___N
Adequate ‘Seat Time’. Allocates realistic amount of time to the act of writing to ensure a quality final product
Use teacher’s experience and information from proficient student writers to develop estimates of minimum writing ‘seat time’ needed to produce quality products for ‘typical’ writing assignments (e.g., 5-paragraph opinion essay; 10-page term paper). Share with students.
Have students keep a writing diary to record amount of time spent in act of writing for each assignment. Require that this information be submitted along with the students’ assignment. (Additional idea: Consider asking parents to monitor and record their child’s writing time.)
Oral vs. Written Work. Student’s dictated and written passages are equivalent in complexity and quality
Allow student to dictate ideas into a tape-recorder and have a volunteer (e.g., classmate, parent, school personnel) transcribe them
Permit the student to use speech-to-text software (e.g., Dragon Naturally Speaking) to dictate first drafts of writing assignments.

24. Writing Production & Revision (Cont.)
Problem?
Writing Competency
Sample Intervention Ideas
___Y ___N
Revision Process. Revises initial written draft before turning in for a grade or evaluation
Create a rubric containing the elements of writing that students should review during the revision process; teach this rubric to the class; link a portion of the grade on writing assignments to students’ use of the revision rubric.
Timely Submission. Turns in written assignments (class work, homework) on time
Provide student incentives for turning work in on time.
Work with parents to develop home-based plans for work completion and submission.
Institute school-home communication to let parents know immediately when important assignments are late or missing.

25. Writing ‘Blockers’

26. Sentence Combining
Students with poor writing skills often write sentences that lack ‘syntactic maturity’. Their sentences often follow a simple, stereotyped format. A promising approach to teach students use of diverse sentence structures is through sentence combining. In sentence combining, students are presented with kernel sentences and given explicit instruction in how to weld these kernel sentences into more diverse sentence types either
by using connecting words to combine multiple sentences into one or
by isolating key information from an otherwise superfluous sentence and embedding that important information into the base sentence.
Sources: Saddler, B. (2005). Sentence combining: A sentence-level writing intervention. The Reading Teacher, 58,
Strong, W. (1986). Creative approaches to sentence combining. Urbana, OL: ERIC Clearinghouse on Reading and Communication Skill & National Council of Teachers of English.

27. Formatting Sentence Combining Examples

31. Team Activity: Use of Sentence Combining as a Writing Strategy Across Content Areas…
Discuss the sentence-combining strategy discussed in this workshop.
Brainstorm ways that schools can promote the use of this strategy across content areas to encourage students to write with greater ‘syntactic maturity’.

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