1. Daily Revision Practice 2
Correct each of the following sentences on your paper:

2. Sentence Revision #1
Because you’re late finishing the job, you’ll have to give us boys the video games to take to Jan’s house.
Because you’re late finishing the job, you’ll have to give us boys the video games to take to Jan’s house.
because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to jans house
Homophone (you’re), Comma (introductory adverbial clause), Apostrophes (contraction, possessive), Pronoun, Proper noun (person)
my sister she dont always have time to visit us on our Birthdays but she does send presents
Single vs. double subject, subject-verb agreement, Apostrophe (contraction), Common noun, Comma (before but in a compound sentence)
What is the complete subject of this sentence?
Hint: It is only a part of one word; most of this sentence belongs in the predicate part of the sentence. 1
My sister doesn’t always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.
My sister doesn’t always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.
What is the complete predicate of this sentence?
Hint: It is everything except two words. 2

3. Sentence Revision #2
there truck would not start irregardless of what they did they finally called youre mechanic i think
Homophones (their, your), Regardless not irregardless, Semicolon (separate two main clauses), Comma (parenthetical expression), Capitalize I
wasnt that a good football game we seen with betty and margaret your friends
Apostrophe (contraction), Verb (see), Proper Nouns (persons), Comma (appositive), Question Mark
Their truck would not start regardless of what they did; they finally called your mechanic, I think. 1
Wasn’t that a good football game we saw with Betty and Margaret, your friends? 2

4. Sentence Revision #3
she has wrote a novel entitled mysterious manor and sold a painting named remembrances
Verb (write), Proper Nouns (book, painting), Underline (book, painting)
its always fare weather was sang by beverly at the festival held at the pilgrim building
Active vs. Passive Voice, Proper nouns (song, building), Apostrophe (contraction), Homophone (fair), Quotation Marks (song), Verb (sing)
She has written a novel entitled Mysterious Manor and sold a painting named Remembrances. 1
Beverly sang “It’s Always Fair Weather” at the festival held at the Pilgrim Building. 2

5. Sentence Revision #4
“The book Childe Harold’s Pilgrimage was written by Lord Byron,” Kim stated, “and is considered one of the author’s best.”
the book childe harold’s pilgrimage was wrote by lord byron kim stated and is considered one of the authors best
Quotation marks (interrupted direct quotation), Proper nouns (book, title, persons), Underline (book), Verb (write), Commas (interrupted quotation), Apostrophe (possessive)
when will you learn me to drive karen asked must i wait another 6 months
Quotation marks (direct quotation), Words confused (teach, learn), Question marks, Proper noun (person), Number under ten, Period (avoid a run-on sentence) 1
“When will you teach me to drive?” Karen asked. “Must I wait another six months?” 2