2. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Technical Writing and Presentation - Graduate English of Mechanical Engineering (7) Comments on Proposal Writing

3. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Introduction of Instructor  Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D., Professor  王正东 —— 实验十七楼 316 室；  电话 : 64253149  E-mail: zdwang@ecust.edu.cn  English name?  ‘ZD’ in the States  ‘Dong’ in Australia  I prefer ZD or Zeady

4. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY A Sample for Technical Writing A Famous Literature Writing 清明时节雨纷纷， 路上行人欲断魂。 借问酒家何处有？ 牧童遥指杏花村。 Change into a Technical Writing 清明雨纷纷， 行人欲断魂。 酒家何处有？ 遥指杏花村。 Summary for a Technical Writing 清明雨， 人断魂。 何处酒？ 杏花村。 Key Words and a Title Keywords: 雨，魂，酒，村 After googling, I got 45,200 results 6 years ago and the first 3 or 5 were the poem. This time 5,660,000, and 11,600,000 ， results last year. The title may be: 清雨断魂问酒村

5. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Comments on Your Homework Advertisement? Product Brochure? Technical Report? Scientific Paper?

6. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Title Beginning with Design, Solve, Develop, … (10 cases in 141) Research, Study(11 cases) Introduction, Development (5 cases) Proposal of (42 cases) Guide to (13 cases)

7. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Scientific Paper Introduction Theoretical Model Experimental Results Discussions Conclusions References

8. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Contents for Typical Proposal Project Title Client A Picture Provided Brief Project Description (Background) Main Tasks (Target) Main Findings and Benefit (Possible Results)

9. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Pictures Provided

10. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 1 A Proposal to Research about Microreaction Scale Continuous Synthesis of CdS Quantum Dots A Continuous Synthesis of CdS Quantum Dots at Microreaction Scale

11. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 2 Analysis on the effect of temperature variation in piezoelectric Analysis of the Effect of Temperature on Performance of Piezoelectric Stick-slip Actuator

12. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 3 The Applications of Stainless Steels In Petrochemical Industries Application of Duplex Stainless Steel in Petrochemical Industry 00Cr18Ni5Mo3Si2

13. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 4 Reducing Air Pollution from Urban Transport Reduction of Air Pollution from Urban Transportation

14. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 5 research on fracture toughness of duplex stainless steel using analytical transmission electron microscopy Investigation of fracture toughness for a duplex stainless steel using transmission electron microscopy

15. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 6 Analysis of Magnetic Driven Pump Bearing Failure and Remake Failure Analysis of Bearing for Magnetic Driven Pump and Its Improvement

16. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 7 A Proposal to Research Characherastics of single-phase and Two-Phase Boiling Heat Transfer and Flow Resistance in Tube- bundle Channels Characteristics Analysis of Boiling Heat Transfer and Flow Resistance in Tube- Bundle Channels for Steam Generators

17. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 8 Analysis of The Crack Produced Reason and Residual life of a 2000m 3 spherical tank Analysis of Crack Initiation and Assessment of Residual Life of a Spherical Tank

18. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 9 Predict 9Cr-1Mo pipe residual life Prediction of residual life for a 9Cr-1Mo pipeline

19. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 10 The Research Of 3D CAD Modeling System Applied In New Type High Efficient Heat Exchanger Dynamic Assembly Simulation of a High- efficient Heat Exchanger with 3D CAD Modeling System

20. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 11 Preparation and Tribological Behavior of New Nanocomposite Coatings Preparation of a Nanocomposite Coating and Measurement of Its Tribological Behavior

21. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 12 Performance Analysis of centrifugal compressor A Similarity Theory to Describe the Performance of Centrifugal Compressor

22. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 13 Automobile Recycling Based on Life Cycle A New Concept of Total Life Cycle for Automobile Recycling

23. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Homework Sample 14 Research on the control technology of Wall- climbing robot for cleaning Design of Motion Control System for a Wall-climbing Robot

24. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY Typical Classroom in Rowan Univ.

25. Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY End Website: http://chemech.ecust.edu.cn/teaching/