1. Common grammar mistakes in your writing Please pay attention.

2. Common mistakes A The tickets is $260 for each, it is at 7p.m. The ticket is $260 for each. It is at 7p.m. And then is a concert, is in the Happy Park. And then there is a concert. It is in Happy Park. And next event is a concert. There have rock and latin in the park. There is a rock concert and a Latin music show in the park.

3. Common mistakes B Taipei 101 have a good show on Sep 29, 30, so I want to introduce some event for you. There is a good show in Taipei 101 on Sep, 29 th and 30 th, so I want to introduce some events to you. Second, There is a play in March 7 th on the young avenue. Second, there is a play on March,7 th on Young Avenue.

4. Common mistakes C The event is $1000. The ticket of the event is $1000. The show is on Sep,27 th nine o’clock p.m. The show is at nine p.m. on Sep, 27 th. The ticket is 25$ foreach. Then second, there is a play on the Bell theater. Then, there is a play at Bell theater.

5. Common mistakes D Capital letters : 地點 / 活動 … at Apple Center Prepositions: on date/ at time / at a place… Avoiding repeating: Don’t use the same sentences in your writing. Transitional words: use one at a time.~ then,… Time sequences: short time  long time at 7 o’clock on Sep, 19 th.

6. Common mistakes E Now please rewrite an new essay for me. Pay attention on all your grammar mistakes and spelling. Try to use the words that you know how to spell or ask your teacher the spelling of the words. I need introduction, body and conclusion in your writing. Don’t miss any part of them. Try your best