1. What’s Wrong? For the following items, please write down what is wrong with the item. *no need for complete sentences this time

2. Power Number Topic Sentence Topic = Reading is important What’s wrong: 1.An essential skill in life is reading. 2.There are three reasons reading is important 3.Many people use their imagination in reading.

3. Power Number Topic Sentence Topic: Reading is Important * Reading is important for jobs, imagination, and work. 4. First thing wrong? 5. Second thing wrong?

4. Power Number Topic Sentence Topic = Reading is important What’s wrong? 6.Reading is important in many ways like for jobs, education, and imagination. 7.It matters in three primary ways.

5. Outline --- What’s wrong? #8 G = Computers important invention Y = entertainment R = games P = PowerPoint P = Minecraft

6. #9 G = Computers important invention Y = entertainment R = games P = Farmville P = Minecraft Y = important R = school work P = essays P = research Y = daily life R = finances P = bills P = online shopping G = Computers vital innovation

7. #10 Which of these is the green? VOLLEYBALLMARINERSTIMER SOCCERHOOPGOAL BATEND ZONESPORTS BASKETBALLVOLLEYBALLREFEREE FOOTBALLNETTOUCHDOWN SEAMSFREE THROWHOME PLATE SPIKEDRIBBLINGSHOOTING LEBRONWORLD CUPBASEBALL

8. What’s What? Millions of kids play sports every day. Among all those sports, baseball is my personal favorite. Baseball has helped socially. Because I am a member of a team, I have improved at cooperating with others. Even when I have a disagreement with a teammate, I stay calm. 0ne time, I even offered to put away all the equipment so others didn’t have to. #11 – What “color” is the underlined sentence? #12. – What “color” is the bold-font sentence?

9. What’s What? Millions of kids play sports every day. Among all those sports, baseball is my personal favorite. Baseball has helped socially. Because I am a member of a team, I have improved at cooperating with others. Even when I have a disagreement with a teammate, I stay calm. 0ne time, I even offered to put away all the equipment so others didn’t have to. #13 – What “color” is the underlined sentence? #14 – What “color” is the bold-font sentence?

10. Slightly different list… #15: What is the green? #16: List the yellows. LINEBACKERBLOCKINGDEFENSE FOOTBALLFIRST DOWNWILSON PASSINGTACKLINGTOUCHDOWN RECEIVERQUARTERBACKOFFENSE SEAHAWKSCATCHINGINTERCEPTING

11. ANSWERS

12. Power Number Topic Sentence Topic = Reading is important What’s wrong: 1.An essential skill in life is reading. * No number word 2. There are three reasons reading is important * “There are” 3.Many people use their imagination in reading. *Many describes people --- not # of reasons reading

13. Power Number Topic Sentence Topic: Reading is Important * Reading is important for jobs, imagination, and work. 4.First thing wrong? 5.Second thing wrong? *combined yellows and green in one sentence *no number word

14. Power Number Topic Sentence Topic = Reading is important What’s wrong? 6.Reading is important in many ways like for jobs, education, and imagination. *combined yellows and green in one sentence 7. It matters in three primary ways. *What is “it” --- reading?

15. Outline --- What’s wrong? #8 G = Computers important invention Y = entertainment R = games P = PowerPoint P = Minecraft *PowerPoint is not “entertainment” (generally)

16. #9 G = Computers important invention Y = entertainment R = games P = Farmville P = Minecraft Y = school work R = English P = essays P = reading articles Y = daily life R = finances P = bills P = online shopping G = Computers very important *last green is identical (basically) to first green – not different enough

17. #10 Which of these is the green? VOLLEYBALLMARINERSTIMER SOCCERHOOPGOAL BATEND ZONESPORTS BASKETBALLVOLLEYBALLREFEREE FOOTBALLNETTOUCHDOWN SEAMSFREE THROWHOME PLATE SPIKEDRIBBLINGSHOOTING LEBRONWORLD CUPBASEBALL

18. What’s What? Millions of kids play sports every day. Among all those sports, baseball is my personal favorite. Baseball has helped socially. Because I am a member of a team, I have improved at cooperating with others. Even when I have a disagreement with a teammate, I stay calm. 0ne time, I even offered to put away all the equipment so others didn’t have to. #11 – What “color” is the underlined sentence? *yellow #12. – What “color” is the bold-font sentence? *pink

19. What’s What? Millions of kids play sports every day. Among all those sports, baseball is my personal favorite. Baseball has helped socially. Because I am a member of a team, I have improved at cooperating with others. Even when I have a disagreement with a teammate, I stay calm. 0ne time, I even offered to put away all the equipment so others didn’t have to. #13 – What “color” is the underlined sentence? *blue --- the “hook” – will learn later #14 – What “color” is the bold-font sentence? *pink

20. Slightly different list… #15: What is the green? #16: List the yellows. LINEBACKERBLOCKINGDEFENSE FOOTBALLFIRST DOWNWILSON PASSINGTACKLINGTOUCHDOWN RECEIVERQUARTERBACKOFFENSE SEAHAWKSCATCHINGINTERCEPTING *Football *Offense Defense