1. SW -5 Integrate newborn action into existing RMNCH initiatives action by all Afghanistan, Nepal, Bangladesh, Pakistan, India, Indonesia

2. Vision: Option2 Targets maternal, newborn & still-births Word “preventable” Larger picture – Continuum of care and beyond Para-phrase word childbirth is celebrate Goal: Option 1 Achieve universal quality coverage of essential interventions for maternal and newborn health

3. Key theme 7: Integrate newborn action into existing RMNCH initiatives and efforts Include “A” Para-phrase - Integrate newborn action into existing RMNCHA initiatives and inter-sectoral efforts Purpose-ful linkages to the existing global initiatives – sieve the list with priority and purpose Articulate “our” purpose and the plan benefits from the GNAP

4. Action: Establish strategic collaborations / coordination with existing RMNCH plans, coalitions, point-persons, champions, leaders and stakeholders at local, national, and regional levels. Action: Ensure newborn and survival is included in the upcoming plans and initiatives.

5. Key theme 8: Action by all – leadership, political will and financing Para 1 – Articulate with more advocacy focus First action are fine Action 2 : Paraphrase – Plan the effective implementation at scale of evidence based newborn interventions & allocate adequate resources for service delivery at the district level. Delete Action bullet 5 Add action on Information and knowledge management