1. The problems caused by population aging

2. Structure problems  -overlapping  -disorder

3. Overlapping sample 1  Ii. Problems  1. labor shortage  2. burden on the family  3. social stress on society to take care of

4. Overlapping sample 2  Problems  1. higher burden on working adults.  2. increasing burden on society  3. families face with challenges about providing for the aged

5. Disorder sample1  Ii.problems  1. burden in family support, welfare and medicine expenditure  2. deficient defense due to less young men enrolled  3. labor shortage

6. Common structure  i. Intro  Ii. Problems  A, B,C  Iii. Solutions  To A, to B, to C  Iv. ending  1. clear cut division between points within one paragraph  2. avoid one solution for both problems

7. body outline sample 1  Problems  1. burden on the younger—no time and energy  2. financial pressure on society---for pension and medicine  3. labor shortage  Solutions  1. support from the government and society  2. saving habit, donation; perfect the welfare system and community medical service  3. immigrate, raise retirement age, boost productivity

8. Body outline 2  Problems  For the elderly themselves: psychological problems: loneliess, sense of uselessness ---influence the families  For the younger---burden: no time, no enough money, no energy  For society: labor shortage, pension burden, insufficient medical service for the old.  Solutions  ----ageing industry, diversified entertainment forms universities for the aged  ----favor to the double income family with the elderly: like paid leave, professional day care

9. language  With the advance of society, family and social structure has changed dramatically.  At first, the labor shortage is the main problem since the labor supply depends on the working adult population.

10.  Nowadays, with the development of medical science, the average life standard all over the world is going up. Many countries and cities are facing the population aging.

11. Key words stand out

12. Not outstanding 1  For old people themselves, there are also some troubles. With the diminished number of younger generation to accompany them, the deficiency of mental demand seems to be biggest problem.

13.  In the first place, because of the dependency of older person with different community resources required to support young people, burden is much heavier.

14. Specific / concrete key words  Government can encourage companies to take more social responsibility.  --by tax favor, with favourable policies, wit h certain priviledges

15.  Secondly, we should make full use of the people