1. Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 Sheryl should of checked to see what kind of a memory card would work better. Corrected Sheryl should have checked to see what kind of memory card would work best. (a deleted)

2. Proofreading Warm-up Item 2 Remember emanuel you’re warranty wont be effective without you mail in you’re registration card. Corrected Remember, Emanuel, your warranty won’t be effective unless you mail in your registration card.

3. Proofreading Warm-up Item 3 Will you please help Lisa and I with these instructions. Corrected Will you please help Lisa and me with these instructions?

4. Proofreading Warm-up Item 4 I didn’t think Id never be able to buy this computer game. Corrected I didn’t think I’d ever be able to buy this computer game.

5. Proofreading Warm-up Item 5 Customizeing your browser is easy if you follow the instructions careful. Corrected Customizing your browser is easy if you follow the instructions carefully.

6. Proofreading Warm-up Item 6 This software is registered to a mr eugene f grabill sr. Corrected This software is registered to a Mr. Eugene F. Grabill, Sr.

7. Proofreading Warm-up Item 7 The instruction manual is setting next to the printer I think. Corrected The instruction manual is sitting next to the printer, I think.

8. Proofreading Warm-up Item 8 Before you buy any peace of electronic equipment you should do some well research Corrected Before you buy any piece of electronic equipment, you should do some good research.

9. Proofreading Warm-up Item 9 Wow Tamika exclaimed That video game is the more exciting one I’ve ever plaied. Corrected “Wow!” Tamika exclaimed. “That video game is the most exciting one I’ve ever played!”

10. Proofreading Warm-up Item 10 The following are all types of consumer documents product descriptions warranties instruction manuals and technical directions. Corrected The following are all types of consumer documents: product descriptions, warranties, instruction manuals, and technical directions.

11. Proofreading Warm-up Item 11 Being as the computer game was defective Reggie recieved a full refund. Corrected Because the computer game was defective, Reggie received a full refund.

12. Proofreading Warm-up Item 12 Well which of the two games is least expensive. Corrected Well, which of the two games is less expensive?

13. Proofreading Warm-up Item 13 With the highly-advanced graphics of this program the train really look like it is receeding into the background. Corrected With the highly advanced graphics of this program, the train really looks as if it is receding into the background. (hyphen deleted)

14. Proofreading Warm-up Item 14 Janelle proceded easyly to the second level of play. Corrected Janelle proceeded easily to the second level of play.

15. Proofreading Warm-up Item 15 Jared he would like to become a world famous designer of computer games someday. Corrected Jared would someday like to become a world- famous designer of computer games. (sentence revised; he deleted)