1. English Final Presentation By: Andrew Sedano

2. Introduction  Goals  Beginning Attitutde  Literacy Memoir  Discourse Community Project Engineering Lab Report Engineering Lab Report  Over All Growth  Interactive Assignment

3. Goals  Broaden my vocabulary  Improve the flow of my papers  Learn new formats  Able to create well defined papers

4. Literacy Memoir  Who are you as writer?  Who/what has influenced your writing?  What in your writing needs improvement?  Reflect on your past writing experiences

5. Literacy Memoir Part I  Anticipations  Steps Brainstorming Journal entries Proposal/Teacher Conference 30 min. writing session  Peer Workshop Multiple viewpoints HOC (Higher Order Concerns) LOC (Lower Order Concerns)  Improvements Grammatical Organization Flow Content

6. Example of Peer Review

8. Literacy Memoir Part II  Anticipations Confident Confident Less grammatical mistakes Less grammatical mistakes  Steps Eliminate all HOC Eliminate all HOC Look over peer review and comments Look over peer review and comments Accept/Not Accept changes Accept/Not Accept changes  Ms. Camargo’s Revisions More specific Include better details

9. Literacy Memoir Part III  Anticipations Better organized Better organized Flows a lot smother Flows a lot smother More detailed More detailed  Steps Eliminate all LOC Consider Ms. Camargo’s revisions Add more detailed and be more specific Proper Format (MLA)  Improvements Better flowing Easily understandable Well organized No grammar mistakes

10. Literacy Memoir Reflection Overall Improvement Proper steps needed in order to consider something as your final draft. Learn how to peer review Better organizational skills Better flowing paper Well developed details Continue to have problems… Putting ideas to paper Introductions/Conclusions Better vocabulary What Was Learned Type of writer Steps taken when approaching a new paper

11. Discourse Community Project  What type of writing will you take part in in your future career? Research Research Reports Reports Design Packages Design Packages Project Proposals Project Proposals  What writing conventions are preeminent in your Discourse Community? Chicago Manual Format Chicago Manual Format Detailed Detailed Labeled Labeled

12. Engineering Conventions

14. Discourse Community Project  Anticipations  Steps Research Individual Report Reflection  Camargo’s Revisions Proper Format Correcting Better Detail Better Word Choice

15. DCP Revisions

16. DCP Reflection  Learned  Type of writing styles and conventions  Jargon  ENGR 1201  Other Discourse Communities  Improvements  Well developed research  Proper Formatting (MLA)

17. Overall Growth  Revisions  Peer Editing  Organization  Better flowing paper  Formatting Skills

18. Journal Write Questions How has your attitude changed regarding peer review since that of your high school years? Why do you think this is? maturity, peer workshop guidelines, etc.

19. THANK YOU QUESTIONS?