1. Healthy Eating Writing 授课教师：陈昭春 单位名称：莆田第四中学 人民教育出版社高中英语 必修三第二单元

2. Writing

3. Talk about the weaknesses in school canteen.

4. Persuasive writing A Letter to Headmaster Mr.Zheng, your vice-headmaster, is in charge of school canteen. Representing your school's student association, you are asked to write a letter to him. Let him know the situation of school canteen and give some advice on how to improve daily diet, especially healthy eating. Mr.Zheng, your vice-headmaster, is in charge of school canteen. Representing your school's student association, you are asked to write a letter to him. Let him know the situation of school canteen and give some advice on how to improve daily diet, especially healthy eating.

5. Dear Mr. Zheng, Dear Sir/ President, I am …, a student from Class …,Senior 1. I am writing to express/convey my concern over the current situation of our school canteen. I would highly/much appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration/ account. Yours sincerely, … 提出问题 (problems/weaknesses) 解决问题 (solutions/suggestions) Body

6. Tips: Your tone should be polite.Your tone should be polite. 1.current situation ( diet, service, menu,etc.) of your school canteen. 2.manner of cooking 3.putting less/more salt / oil 4.serving some fresh vegetables and fruits after meals 5.what might add to the menu? 6.what's your advice on these weaknesses....... points:

7. Writing skills 一、 The skills to organize the structure of a paragraph.

8. _ _- A varied, balanced intake( 摄取量 ) provides the nutrients （营养） you need to avoid the lack of nutrients. This also includes non- nutrients, such as fiber and water. Benefits of a balanced diet E 1 A. Preventing and treating disease B. Managing your weight C. Enjoying life D. Advice on a healthy diet E. Meeting your nutritional 营养 needs

9. 2A B. Managing your weight C. Enjoying life D. Advice on a healthy diet E. Meeting your nutritional needs A. Preventing and treating disease Benefits of a balanced diet _ _- One of the key benefits of a healthy diet is that it can help prevent you from developing certain diseases, such as cancer and heart disease. It is also helpful in treating high blood pressure.

10. _ _ - There are other benefits of a healthy diet. Food is an important part of many social events, and is a major way of connecting with other people. Cooking meals can be an enjoyable way to spend time, whether alone or with others. 3 C A. Preventing and treating disease B. Managing your weight D. Advice on a healthy diet E. Meeting your nutritional needs C. Enjoying life Benefits of a balanced diet

11. __ __- Eating well is important if you are to keep a suitable weight. Eating the wrong food, or over-eating, will lead to weight gain, and all the problems associated with it. A. Preventing and treating disease C. Enjoying life D. Advice on a healthy diet E. Meeting your nutritional needs 4 B B. Managing your weight Benefits of a balanced diet

12. Writing skills 二、 The skills to beautify the sentences.

13. Replace the sentences by using the original ones 1. Delicious fruit could be the best. 2. The thin hostess came forward. 4. He smiled as he welcomed some customers warmly at the door but he did not smile when he saw Yong Hui walking in. 5. Their balanced diets became very successful and before long Wang Peng became thinner and Yong Hui became fatter. 3. Wang Peng sat in his empty restaurant and felt very upset. 精彩：用否定比较级表达最高级. 精彩：同位语增加句式的多样性 精彩：长句复合句型，名词替代形容词等 Nothing could be better than delicious fruit. The hostess, a very thin lady, came forward. He smiled as he welcomed some customers warmly at the door but the smile left his face when he saw Yong Hui walking in. Their balanced diets became such a great success that before long Wang Peng became slimmer and Yong Hui put on more weight. Wang Peng sat in his empty restaurant feeling very frustrated 懊恼. 精彩：现在分词表伴随，使用高级词汇 精彩：复合句中运用拟人的手法 Appreciate these beautiful sentences

14. Talk about the weaknesses in school canteen.

15. 1.The school canteen serves too much salt and fried food, which is harmful to / does great harm to our health. 2. There is a limit to the choices of food offered in our school canteen, especially for those who are particular about their diet. 3. There is far too little fibre and vitamin which can help us fight diseases. …...be rich in fat, sugar, salt....be rich in fat, sugar, salt....be weak in fibre....be weak in fibre. serve heavy food.serve heavy food. menu is so limited.menu is so limited. Some suggested expressions

16. Dear Mr. Zheng, Dear Sir/ President, I am …, a student from Class …,Senior 1. I am writing to express/convey my concern over the current situation of our school canteen. I would highly/much appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration/ account. Yours sincerely, … 提出问题 (problems/weaknesses) 解决问题 (solutions/suggestions) Body

17. Homework Perfect your writing after class.

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