1. “My First Free Summer” Essay

2. Let’s Look at “The Luckiest Time of All” Essay from the Assessment Repetition Topic Sentence “because” Transitions Commas Random Periods Paragraph Form What’s a Sentence- subject & predicate Off Topic Sentences Information from the Story Talking to the Essay/ Audience Exclamation Points Conjunctions as Sentence Starters Closing Sentence- No “The End” Write Out Numbers Up to Ten

5. “My First Free Summer” Ten Sentence Paragraph Green- Topic Sentence- Answer the question without using “because”. Yellow- Key Idea- Support your answer. Use transitions. Include at least four key ideas. Stick to ideas from the story. Red- Explain- Explain or discuss your key ideas. Green- Concluding Sentence- Restate your topic sentence. Do not introduce anything new here. Do not change your opinion.