1. Mandala Essay
Draft Revision

2. The Basics 7 Paragraphs 5 sentence minimum for each paragraph
Intro
Body paragraphs for each symbol
Conclusion
5 sentence minimum for each paragraph
TYPED, Double Spaced, Times New Roman
DUE: Wed. Nov. 26
Submit orignal + typed version

3. Hook the Reader Every essay needs a great lead. Character description
Setting description
Summary statement

4. Character Description
Your mandala represents YOU so start with yourself
EX: “I will sleep with a clear conscience. I will sleep in peace.” These two lines from Sinead O’Connor’s song titled The Emperor’s New Clothes struck a chord in me the first time I heard them as a college student. These words sum up how I want live my life, no matter how much money I acquire, or how much success I attain.

5. Setting Description Start with a place that reveals YOU.
EX: When a guest enters my house, he/she is greeted by chili-pepper red walls that scream “Welcome.” There is no time to wait. All who enter must be ready for the excitement, challenges, or uncertainties that await. I don’t think I can ever paint this hall because that would be like painting over me.

6. Summary Statement
Write a statement about YOU that makes the reader think.
EX: I’m the dog stalker. If there’s dog to greet and pet, I’m there. No silly sidewalk gets in my way. That’s just how I am in everything I do. I never let obstacles stand in my way.

7. Add Imagery Bring your story to life. Add sense details Sight Sound
Taste
Touch
Smell

8. Add Variety Start each sentence with a different word.
Write verb cluster sentences
Check that sentences have a mix of lengths.
Count the number of words!

9. Transitions Use transition words to connect each paragraph.
EX: First, next, however, in addition, etc.

10. AVOID “YOU” Autobiography = I
Avoid talking to the audience – they don’t talk back.
Change all incorrect “you” forms
THINK: I, me, my, mine

11. End with a Bang Leave the reader thinking…
Snapshot – leave the reader with a picture
Dialogue – leave the reader with famous last words
Thoughtshot– Final reflections on yourself.