1. The Essential Skill of Writing An Introductory Training for High School Teachers Penny Plavala, Multnomah ESD Using the Writing Scoring Guide

2. Workshop Goals 1. Review  Oregon’s Writing Scoring Guide  Practice scoring student samples: calibration  Classroom uses of the Writing Scoring Guide 2. Understand  Options for Demonstrating Proficiency in the Essential Skill of Writing for the Oregon Diploma

3. OAR: 581-22-0615 For students first enrolled in grade 9 during the 2009-2010 school year, in school districts and public charter schools shall require students to demonstrate proficiency in the Essential Skills listed: read and comprehend a variety of text write clearly and accurately

4. Write Clearly and Accurately  Adapt writing to different audiences, purposes, and contexts  Develop supported, focused, well-reasoned, and organized communications  Write to explain, summarize, inform, and persuade  Use appropriate conventions including correct usage, punctuation, capitalization, and spelling ODE Essential Skills Definitions

5. Essential Skill Proficiency Three options for diploma requirement: 1. Smarter Balanced Assessment Score of _______ 2. Other approved standardized assessments SAT Writing Assessment score of 460 ACT Writing Assessment score of 19 3. Writing Work Samples

6. Writing Work Samples Two work samples  1 expository or persuasive  1 any mode: expository, persuasive or narrative (personal or fictional) Score of 4 or higher in 4 traits on Official Scoring Guide

7. How will Essential Skill work samples be assessed? Teachers use the official state writing scoring guide. Teachers must be trained to use the scoring guide.

8. The Writing Scoring Guide Background Developed by Oregon teachers Introduced in late 1980’s Reviewed and updated frequently State assessment since early 1990’s Strongly tied to instruction High inter-rater reliability National recognition

9. Six Writing Traits 6. Conventions 2. Organization 3. Voice 4. Word Choice 5. Sentence Fluency 1. Ideas and Content What 4 traits “count” towards the composite score?

10. Writing Scoring Scale

11. Ideas and Content Clear Enough Details Focused Relevant Details

12. Organization Introduction Body Conclusion Good beginning Well developed Reader can follow ideas Good transitions Paragraph breaks Well developed Satisfying ending

13. Easy to Read Aloud? Enough Variety? Stylistic Control? Supply punctuation where natural Sentence structure Sentence beginnings Sentence lengths Effective fragments Natural dialogue Sentence Fluency

14. Number of Words * Chart the number of words in each sentence. 21 20 19 18 17 16 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 1234567891011 First Words * Write down the first two words in each sentence.

15. Conventions Kinds of Errors Significance of Errors Proportion of Errors

16. Voice (Score is not required) Commitment to topic Sincere, engaging Writer’s Voice Present? Topic, Mode Audience, level of formality Appropriate Voice?

17. Word Choice (Score is not required) Functional? Appropriate? Enough variety? Specific enough?

18. The Writing Scoring Guide Purposes 1.Instructional Tool 2.Formative Assessment 3.Summative Assessment 4.Demonstrate Proficiency in the Essential Skill of Writing to earn an Oregon Diploma

19.  Set expectations for writing activity  Teacher or peers give feedback during rough draft stage Using the Scoring Guide as an instructional tool during prewriting and drafting

20.  Peer feedback on Sentence Fluency and Word Choice  Students self-assess on Ideas/Content, Organization & Conventions  Option: Use the Student Language Scoring Guide  Look at all 5’s on one page Using the Scoring guide as an instructional tool during editing, revising, & proofreading

21. Summative Assessment  End of unit assessment  Final (semester) exams  Student self-assessment using writing from different times during course  OAKS Statewide Writing Assessment  Meet requirement for local performance assessment  Demonstrate Proficiency in Essential Skill of Writing to receive Oregon Diploma

22. Essential Skill Proficiency Requirements for Writing Essential Skill Proficiency Using Work Samples  2 work samples  1 expository or persuasive  1 any mode  Score of 4 or higher in 4 traits on Official Scoring Guide

23. Work Sample Design Local work samples must be designed to elicit student writing that is long enough and complex enough to be scored using the Writing Scoring Guide.

24. What is long enough and complex enough? sustained writing – single author specific focus & sufficient details intro, body, & conclusion to score for Organization No length requirement…….. (however…) 1 ½ - 2 pages handwritten is about the minimum

25. Work Sample Design Unsuitable (NOT long or complex enough)  Short answers (even a couple of ¶ )  Journals  Logs; responses to activities or summaries  Tests or quizzes  Workbook or worksheet activities  Book reports

26. Work Sample Design Expository Mode: Explain problem, process, concept, etc. Analysis of issues, events, speakers, etc. Comparison/contrast Brief research or response papers (2-3 pages) Persuasive Mode: Essay taking a stand on an issue Pro/Con and call to action Narrative Mode: Relating an experience (real or imagined)

27. Work Sample Implementation Administration  Work samples must be the product of an individual  Work samples must be supervised by an authorized adult  Students may not work on work samples outside a supervised setting

28. Work Sample Implementation Administration  Word processed papers are permitted.  Grammar and spell-check features may be used.  Students should have time to do their best work. Generally, three one-hour sessions are recommended.

29. Work Sample Implementation Scoring  All work samples must be scored using Oregon’s Official Writing Scoring Guide.  All raters must have been trained to use the Scoring Guide.  Only one set of scores is required for a work sample. (Districts may want more than one rater for borderline papers.)

30. Work Sample Implementation Feedback and Revision FEEDBACK: Only 2 options 1.Oregon’s Official Scoring Form 2.Highlighting Oregon’s Scoring Guide STUDENT REVISION: 1.Students are allowed to revise and resubmit their work samples following scoring / feedback. 2.Most papers should be revised only once. (papers with a mix of 3’s and 4’s)

31. Work Sample Design Key to Success: Good Prompts 1. Clear, concise wording 2. Identify task and mode 3. Be open-ended 4. Be free from bias 5. Encourage fresh, original thinking

32. Resources  ODE Website: http://www.ode.state.or.us/search/page/?id=2042  ODE High School Writing Samples http://www.ode.state.or.us/search/page/?id=2704  Practice Writing Scoring Sitehttp://discs.orvsd.orghttp://discs.orvsd.org