1. Summary Words 2 Lesson 3 http://marks-writing-lessons.wikispaces.com/

2. Following the developing of this world, a key word is becoming much more important now, that is "Globalization". What's globalization? For me, globalization means connections of this world are more close and whatever in economy or culture, it's opening now. As a result of these changes, in recent years, China's fast- developing impressed the world and some people announced now China played a very important role in this world. General Statement Definition Summary word & Elaboration 2

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4. Following the developing of this world, a key word is becoming much more important now, that is "Globalization". What's globalization? For me, globalization means connections of this world are more close and whatever in economy or culture, it's opening now. As a result of these changes, in recent years, China's fast- developing impressed the world and some people announced now China played a very important role in this world. General Statement Definition Summary word & Elaboration 4

5. 1: Summary Words continued 2. Elaboration (writing practice)

6. Worksheet 2 Summary Word Process Situation Finding Estimation Problem Difficulty Disruption View

7. Worksheet 3 Irrigation in Africa Decline in Motor Vehicle Deaths Researchers’ conclusion New construction  More traffic Life expectancy 47  68  77

8. Guess the word I didn't feel right picking up the phone and talking to Freddy while Angelo was in my room, so instead of answering I switched off the ringer. I could see from the alert light it rang long as it could before switching to voice mail. It started right back up in a matter of seconds. This _______ went on a long time, ringing and ringing and switching to voice mail and ringing again.

9. Guess the word It appears as if the quarterback is simply following orders, as if he knows where he is going to throw the ball before the play begins. But this ________of the game is deeply misleading. After the ball is snapped, the ordered plan that fills the playbook degenerates into a street fight.

10. Guess the word Facebook also offers a " Notes " section, which has turned into another way of making yourself known to others at a deeper level. Not long ago someone wrote a note called " 25 Things You May Not Know About Me. " The person who came up with this _____ and wrote the note then invited 25 friends to read the note then write their own " 25 Things " list and share it with their friends

11. Technology essay Since the late 20 th century, humans have gradually adopted internet-based communication technology, such as email, Skype, social networking sites, instant messenger, and smartphones. These technologies have endowed us with new and different styles of communication which help us exchange information and emotions and build and maintain our relationships. Overall, this change has to be regarded as beneficial, especially for communication between family and friends.

12. Topic sentence: Body pgh 1. It is clear that Internet-based communication allows us to share more information, but it is more difficult to see its effect on emotional communication.

13. 1. (argument) Sharing information can help sharing emotion 2. Communicating emotional events needs context 3. (example problem) I have a fight with my roommate and want to tell my sister 4. Many small problems before big fight 5. My sister does not know about small things, does not understand my feelings 6. I am frustrated so maybe don’t contact my sister. 7. IM and social networking sites let people share small updates 8. (result) People already know context when important things happen 9. (closing comment):Sharing information does help emotional communication.

14. Pgh 1 sample: It is clear that Internet-based communication allows us to share more information, but it is more difficult to see its effect on emotional communication. (1)I believe there is a relationship between the two: by making it easier to share information, the Internet has also made it easier to share our feelings. (2)A common problem when trying to share our lives with loved ones who are far away is giving them enough context for the important events in our lives. (3)If I have a big argument with my roommate, I may want to tell my sister about it. (4)For her to understand the problem, and to understand why I am so upset, she needs to know about all the little things that happened before the argument. (5)If I am very upset, it may be hard for me to explain everything, my sister will not really understand me. (6)These frustrations can make me avoid contacting my sister when I am upset. (7) IM and social networking solve this problem by allowing people to give each other frequent, small updates about their daily lives. (8) Then, when emotional events occur, our loved ones have enough information about our lives to provide sympathy and support. (9) By giving us the ability to share information with each other, Internet technology allows us to share more emotional support as well.

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