1. The Effect of Acne Medication on the Growth of S. Epidermidis bacteria
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2. Types of Acne
Comedo - when a follicle is clogged with dirt, bacteria, and dead skin cells.
Blackheads
Whitehead
Pustule - an inflamed red circle on the skin with a white center.
Papule - a small, red, inflamed bump with no pus.
Nodule - similar to a papule. It is an inflamed elevation of the skin.
Cyst - “…an abnormal membranous sac containing a liquid or semi-liquid substance consisting of white blood cells, dead cells, and bacteria. Often very painful and they extend to deeper layers of skin” ("What Is Acne?").
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3. Background
Each hair follicle on the skin contains a sebaceous gland which produces sebum. Sebum is an oily substance that coats the skin and protects it.
Acne is formed when dead skin cells and dirt clog the pore and then sebum starts to build up in the follicle. Then Propionibacterium acnes (P.acnes) infects and multiplies inside the sebum.
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4. Question
What is the effect of acne medication on the growth of S. epidermidis bacteria?
Effect
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5. Hypothesis
Acne medication with the highest percentage of the main anti-acne ingredient will have the largest effect on the growth of bacteria and therefore the largest zones of inhibition.
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6. Materials 3 different acne medications
6 Petri dishes prepared with agar
6 sterile swabs
16mL of sterile water
Culture of S. epidermidis bacteria
24 discs
4 empty Petri dishes
4 pipettes
Incubator
Gloves
Lab coat
Balance
Tweezers
Tape
Bunsen Burner
Timer
Goggles
Sharpie marker

7. Acne Ingredients Active Ingredients:
Neutrogena Rapid Clear Gel - 2% Salicylic Acid
AcneFree Terminator - 2% Benzoyl Peroxide
CVS Acne Treatment Gel - 10% Benzoyl Peroxide
Carbomer, Triethanolamine, and Bezoyl Peroxide are common to the CVS brand gel and the AcneFree brand gel.
Alcohol was present in both Neutrogena brand gel and the AcneFree brand gel.
Water is present in all 3 acne medications.
In addition, the acne medications all have other excipients.

8. Variables Independent variable: The different types of acne medication
Dependent variable: The size of the zones of inhibition
Control variable: A disk soaked in 4mL of sterile water and no acne medication
Constant variables: The type of bacteria, the same amount of acne medication and water in each solution, the same temperature of the surrounding air, the same amount of time each disc soaked in the solution, the same amount of time kept in the incubator, and the same kind of Petri dishes and discs.

9. Procedure 1. Fill 6 dishes with agar using sterile technique
2. Hydrate bacteria using sterile technique
3. 24 hours later; label all 6 Petri dishes.
4. Weigh 1 gram of the first acne medication and mix it with 4mL of sterile water in an empty Petri dish.
5. Repeat step 4, 2 more times using a different acne medication each time.
6. Put 4mL of sterile water in an empty Petri dish.
7. Put 6 discs in each of the 4 empty Petri dishes with 3 different acne medications and one with just sterile water.
8. Let discs soak.
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10. Procedure
9. Swab S. epidermidis bacteria on the agar using sterile technique. 10. After discs soak for 20 minutes, put a disc from each of the 3 mixtures and one of water in each of the 6 Petri dishes with bacteria. 11. Each dish should have 4 discs in it. 12. Tape Petri dishes. 13. Let the 6 Petri dishes sit in the incubator for 24 hours. 14. Measure the zones of inhibition after 24 hours. 15. Autoclave the dishes and then dispose of them.

12. Zones of Inhibition (millimeters)
Neutrogena
AcneFree
CVS
Water
Trial 1 20 50 30 10
Trial 2
Trial 3 40
Trial 4 25
Trial 5
Trial 6
Average 21 43 28
StDev
1.9
4.7
2.5
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14. Results Continued *ANOVA P-value = 5.08E-13 * T-Test : ANOVA SUMMARY :
Groups
Count
Sum
Average
Variance
Column 1 6
125
Column 2
260
Column 3
165
27.5
7.5
Column 4 60 10
*ANOVA P-value = E-13
* T-Test :
Neutrogena v. CVS
Water v. Neutrogena
E-07

15. Limitations
These results may differ if a different type of bacteria is used.
Even though sterile technique was used throughout the experiment there is always the risk of contamination.
Medications that had volatile materials such as alcohol may have evaporated upon incubation.
Discs may not have absorbed at the same rate.

16. Continuation
To further this experiment different bacteria such as P.acnes could be used.
In addition, acne medication with other types of active ingredients could be used as well as prescription medication or natural remedies.
Testing humans with acne would be ideal, but hard for me or other high school students to obtain.
Incubation at room temperature could make a difference because the temperature of the skin is close to room temperature.
Another idea for continuation would be to isolate ingredients so it is just one active ingredient with no excipients.

17. Conclusion
AcneFree brand gel (2% Benzoyl Peroxide) had the largest zones of inhibition compared to the CVS brand gel(10% Benzoyl Peroxide) and the Neutrogena brand gel (2% Salicylic Acid).
One possible explanation for why Benzoyl Peroxide did better than Salicylic Acid in this experiment is because Benzoyl Peroxide acts as an anti-bacterial that removes bacteria in the follicles, while Salicylic Acid slows down the process of skin cells shedding inside the hair follicle which clogs the pores.
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18. Conclusion
The AcneFree brand which only had 2% Benzoyl Peroxide might have done better in killing the bacteria than the CVS brand with 10% Benzoyl Peroxide possibly because the AcneFree Brand contained alcohol which is very effective in removing dirt and oil from the skin and preventing the growth of acne.

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