1. Technical paper writing for journal and conference submission III Zhen Jiang Department of Computer Science Information Security Center West Chester University West Chester, PA 19335, USA E-mail: zjiang@wcupa.eduzjiang@wcupa.edu (or zjia6427@yahoo.com)zjia6427@yahoo.com 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

2. Outline Comment Issues Our Approach Conclusion 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

3. Comment Issues List of all things ◦ What is your work, one idea, one target? ◦ Its use, is the technique presented sounds? ◦ Novelty, contribution 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

4. Comment Issues Not specified, too general ◦ Complete survey, relevance, who else can read/understand it?  Not too broad  More specified ◦ What is your target? ◦ Novelty, contribution 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

5. Comment Issues What, why Sell to ◦ Who else can read/understand ◦ What is your work, main technique ◦ The use of your technique 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

6. Our approach Related work ◦ Complete survey, potential TPC list, who else can read/understand ◦ Distinguish your work from others, image that a simple comment “Your work is trivial” can kill your submission. ◦ See how the techniques evolve. Is your solution the ultimate one? ◦ Prove your contribution 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

7. Our approach Introduction ◦ Is it directly attracting the reader? ◦ Use reference to strengthen any statement or use of your work (*you need to have a survey or related work section in advance). ◦ “In this paper, we provide/present/propose …” ◦ Explain how your method works? ◦ Highlight your contribution. 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

8. Our approach Algorithm (Explanation of your work clearly) ◦ Pseudo code, sentence, not in C/C++ or other code ◦ Algorithm & explanation ◦ Citation of formula (no citation, no need for label) ◦ Highlight your explanation at the beginning of each paragraph ◦ Control the size, not too long, no long sentences ◦ Summery for each section at the beginning 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

9. Our approach Simulation ◦ Does the curve explain the idea/approach that is proposed here in this paper? ◦ Is this evidence sufficient enough? ◦ Environment subsection. ◦ Result subsection. ◦ A comparison with other approaches is needed. ◦ Summarize the features/properties that can be explained with experimental data. ◦ Analyze the experimental data and highlight the success of the proposed approach. 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

10. Our approach Analysis ◦ Explanation of the proposed method/approach ◦ Proof ◦ Experimental results analysis Conclusion ◦ Summary of the proposed method/approach, not just the experimental results. ◦ Anything mentioned here must be well-supported by the previous context. ◦ Future work. 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China

11. Thank you! Questions and Comments 10/24/2015Hangzhou Dianzi University, China