2. How to Get Your Composition Advanced 1. 改变句子的开头 --- 灵活的奥妙 2. 多种句式 --- 精彩总是在变化中 3. 分词和不定式 --- 极富表现力的表达 4. 过渡词 --- 文章的润滑剂 5. 习语 --- 使你文采飞扬, 与众不同 6. 洋味十足 --- 话措词 7. 不难的一招 --- 相同的意思用不同 的词语

3. A Student ’ s version Many students feel it difficult to finish so much homework. Not only do they have classes in school but also do their homework at home. I have heard that some of students stay up until midnight. How hard they are! In my opinion, there are some reasons causing it. On one hand, the teachers consider that the more exercise the students do, the better they will learn. so the teachers ask the poor students to do a good many work. On the other hand, the parents also demand their children that they should do too much homework in order to get their lessons improved. I ’ m not in favour of taking too much work. The teachers and parents should change their way to bring up their children. ____________________ __________________ __________ ________ ______________ ___________ _______ __________ _______ ________ a great deal of ____________ __ /

4. 1. 改变句子的开头方式. 不要一味地用主语开头, 适当使用状语提前 1).We met at the school gate and went together early in the morning 2). The young man could not help crying when he heard the news. 3) We all Know that internet will help us a lot if we use it properly. Early in the morning, we met in the school gate and went together Hearing the news, the young man couldn ’ t help crying As is known to us all/As we all know, internet will Help us a lot if we use it properly

5. 多种句式. 避免在整篇文章中只使用一两个句式, 可以灵活运用省略 句, 强调句, 倒装句, 主从复句 with 独立主格结构 1).My parents praised Ahfu warmly.It had saved my sister bravely. 2).We had to stand there to catch other offenders 3).Our school has changed a lot. 4). He opened his eyes wide and looked at me curiously. 5).When I saw the scene, I felt very frightened. 6).We don ’ t have enough time to have a rest for a single day. My parents praised Ahfu warmly,who had saved my sister bravely. What we had to do is to stand there to catch other offenders Our school has been /is no longer what it was /used to be. He looked at me curiously with his eyes wide open. At the scene, how frightened I felt! Not a single day do we have enough time to have a rest.

6. 分词和不定式 --- 极强的语言表现力 1. He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offenders. 2. We had s short rest,Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told stories ;some played chess. 3. Tom is a boy of six. He knows three languages. 4. The boss was greatly satisfied with my answer and decided to employ me. He stopped us half an hour ago to make us catch the … Having had a short rest,we began to play happily,singing and dancing. Some told stories, while others played chess. Being a boy of six, Tom knows three languages. As a boy of six, Tom … Aged six, Tom … Greatly satisfied with my answer, the boss decided to

7. 过渡词 --- 文章的润滑剂 时间顺序 first, second, then, finally/at last, soon immediately, suddenly 空间顺序 here, there, on one side … on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to 对称顺序 for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand,on the other hand 转折顺序 but, however, while, though, otherwise 因果顺序 because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of) 条件顺序 as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless 让步顺序 though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what,when, where)ever 递进顺序 what ’ s more, besides, to make the matter worse,what ’ s worse 过渡性插入语 I think, I ’ m afraid, you know, As we all know

8. 巧用习语 --- 增加文采 巧用一些介词短语, 名词短语, 形容词短语 使文采不同凡响 1).Many houses are being built. 2).She hurried to catch the train. 3).When I thought of the coming holiday, I just couldn’t helping smiling. 4).We decided to stay to help the poor old lady 5).When the man got on the bus,he was tired and hungry. Many houses are under construction. She was in a hurry to catch the train. At the thought of the coming holiday, I just … We made a decision to give help to the poor old lady Tired and hungry, the man got on the bus.

9. 洋味十足 --- 才是好文章 I don ’ t want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. She shouted loudly, “ I ’ ve succeeded! ” I was very eager to go home. I don ’ t want to share a hotel room with a stranger. She shouted at the top of her voice, “ I ‘ ve made it! ” I couln ’ t wait to go home.

10. 不难的一招 --- 相同的意思用不同的词语 1)I like being left quiet while my sister likes being in an active situation. 2)My father lost his work one week after my mother got her work in a supermarket. I like being left quiet while my sister enjoys being in an active situation. My father lost his work one week after my Mother got her job in a supermarket.

11. 展示平台 --- 你来试试 ? Rewrite the following passage: Li Hong and I decided to make some cards ourselves for mothers to celebrate Women ’ s Day. I made a card.It was made of hard paper.There was a red leaf on it. It read “ Congratulations,Mum! ” The red leaf stands for my heart.Li Hong drew a picture.In the picture was a lovely panda with a bucket.Yang Ming made a dove with a piece of hard paper. There was a note in its mouth. It read “ Wish you happy all through your life! ” Our mothers were pleased after they received the presents.

12. 结 束 语结 束 语 书面表达最能体现你 的基本功, 所以平时 要加强自己的基础 知识学习. 临渊羡鱼, 不如退而织网. 只有 基本功扎实了, 才能 得心应手, 随意发挥. 句子长短总相宜, 各 种表达随我用. 希望 本节课给大家有所启 发, 有所收获. Thanks for attending.Bye!