1. Structure of Formal Reports Chapter 9
Technical Communication
Ch9, 6th edition, W.S. Pfeiffer
Structure of Formal Reports Chapter 9

2. Formal Reports 1- Covers complex projects.
2- Not defined by length, not including appendices.
3- Has more substance than informal report.
4- Directed to more diverse readers.

3. Formal Reports ABC Format
Abstract:
Cover/Title page.
Letter or Memo of transmittal.
Table of Content.
List of Illustration.
Executive Summary.
Introduction.
Body:
Discussion section.
Conclusion:
Conclusion.
Recommendation.

4. Cover/Title page The first page to be seen, attractive & informative.
Use of graphics to reinforce the theme & distingtion
Contains:
Project title (Exactly as it appears on transmittal).
Client’s name (Prepared for …)
Your name ( Prepared by …)
Date of submission

5. Model 9--1 Title page with illustration (see explanation on page 303)
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6. Transmittals
Like appetizer, gives the reader the taste of what is a head.
Includes major points in the report.
Follow letters or memo conventions.

7. Model 9--2 Letter of transmittal
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8. Model 9--3 Memo of transmittal
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9. T O C
Act as the report outline, readers can refer to it to locate report sections and enhance the readability.

10. Model 9--4 Table of contents (all subheadings included)
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11. Model 9--5 Table of contents (third-level subheadings omitted)
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12. List of illustration
A list of all illustrations in the body of the report that include the NUMBER, NAME, PAGE.

13. Model 9--6 List of illustrations–formal report
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14. Executive Summary A stand alone section Technical jargon free
One page that provide Decision Makers that include only important conclusions and recommendations.

15. Model 9--7 Executive summary–formal report
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16. Introduction
Prepare both technical and nontechnical readers for the discussion a head.
Include project description

17. Model 9--8 Introduction–formal report
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18. Discussion Section The longest part of the formal report.
Move from FACTS to OPENIONS:
Collect data (samples, interviews, records, …)
Subject these data to verification or testing.
Analyze all the information using your professional experience and skills to form conclusions.
Develop recommendations from the conclusions that you have formed.
Use of headings and subheadings.
Use illustration for clarification & Persuasion.
Place excessive details in appendices.

19. Conclusion & Recommendations
CONCLUSIONS: are convictions or beliefs based on the findings of your study.
RECOMMENDATIONS: actions you are suggesting based on your conclusions.
Conclusion & Recommendation
Executive summary
Exhaustive technical Details
Selected list of the most important conclusions
Directed for technical and management level
Directed for D-M

20. References
You should state the sources of all facts and figures that are not General Knowledge.
Listed alphabetically by the author last name at the end of the report.
Most common method of documentation is American Psychological Association (APA) Style.

21. Reference List Samples
Book:
Elliott, D.W.(1994) The effects of free trade on Canadian Business. Scarborough, Ontario: Prentice-Hall, Canada.
Journal Article:
Patrick, N. L. (1990).The role of ergonomics in contemporary business practice. Business Psychology,82, 675–83.
Electronic reference:
Jacobson, J.W., Mulick, J.A., & Schwartz,A.A. (1995).A history of facilitated communication: Science, pseudoscience, and antiscience: Science working group on facilitated communication. American Psychologist,50, 750–765. Retrieved January 25, 1996, from the World Wide Web:
(M.J. Rhiner, personal communication, October 24, 1996)
Newsgroup (Ellen Jones, newsgroup posting, March 17, 1997)
Discussion list (Paul Prentiss, discussion list posting, April 7, 1997)

22. Stating the source of information in the body of the report.
Citation
Stating the source of information in the body of the report.
Author’s Last Name & publication date, or Page number or chapter number:
(Laudon, 2006) (O’Brien, 1999, P.49) (Pfiefer, 2000, Ch 3)

23. Appendix/Appendices
Any important supporting materials, maps, tests, illustrations, legal documents are all appended to the end of the report

24. Study of Wildwood Creek
Sample Formal Report
Study of Wildwood Creek
Winslow, Georgia

25. Model 9--9 Formal report Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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26. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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27. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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28. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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29. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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30. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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31. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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32. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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33. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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34. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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35. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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36. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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37. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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38. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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39. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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40. Model 9--9 continued Pfeiffer Technical Writing, 5ed.
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