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假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按如下要求完成一篇 短文: 1. 简要描述下图的内容,并点明主题; 2. 联系实际,谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法。 注意: 1. 词数不少于 120 个; 2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校。提示词:蜗牛 snail.

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Presentation on theme: "假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按如下要求完成一篇 短文: 1. 简要描述下图的内容,并点明主题; 2. 联系实际,谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法。 注意: 1. 词数不少于 120 个; 2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校。提示词:蜗牛 snail."— Presentation transcript:

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2 假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按如下要求完成一篇 短文: 1. 简要描述下图的内容,并点明主题; 2. 联系实际,谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法。 注意: 1. 词数不少于 120 个; 2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校。提示词:蜗牛 snail

3 讲评 从漫画中两只蜗牛中一只所说的话 “Look! They are moving more slowly than us” 可以 看出两只蜗牛在开玩笑来取笑路上拥挤的 汽车比它们还要跑得慢。由此我们可以推 断:交通拥挤问题的严重性。

4 ① From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars on the crowded roads. This humorous picture isn’t just to amuse us. It actually shows us one of the most serious problems. As we all know, the issue of heavy traffic has long been a problem. ② In the picture, there are two snails playing a joke about the cars on the crowded roads. How slowly they are moving. The picture conveys us the message that heavy traffic is a serious problem.

5 ③ In the picture, two snails are playing a joke about the cars on the crowded roads. They are moving so slowly that we can’t help thinking of the seriousness of heavy traffic. ④ From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars which are moving very slowly on the crowded roads. This humorous picture isn’t just to amuse us but actually shows us one of the most serious problems. That is, heavy traffic is a serious problem.

6 分析现象产生的原因可以从下列考生比 较熟悉的几个方面来考虑: 随着经济的发展,私家车的增加; 随着汽车的增加和城市人口的增加,一 些道路等交通设施仍然没有得到改善; 行人交通意识的淡薄等等。

7 ① But why does this happen? I think several factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, with the rapid development of our country's economy, more and more cars are coming into common families, which causes serious traffic jams. Secondly, with a large number of population and numbers of cars increasing, although the government puts a large amount of money on building or repairing roads every year, the quality of the roads is not satisfactory. What’s worse, some public transportation still remain unimproved. Thirdly, some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations, so it’s not uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic.

8 ② There are many causes for this problem, but the following may be the most important ones. The first cause is the great increase in the number of private cars. Cars take up more space but they carry fewer people. The second cause is the slow and inefficient construction and improvement of the roads and streets. With a large population and numbers of cars increasing, some roads still remain unimproved. The last cause is the insufficient management of the traffic system and some people’s lack of awareness of traffic regulations, which is an obstacle to the flow of traffic.

9 ③ Firstly, the number of private cars keeps growing every day. Secondly, with a large number of population and numbers of cars increasing, some roads still remain unimproved. Thirdly, some people’s lack of awareness of traffic regulation also results in traffic jam.

10 紧紧围绕所分析的原因(不要面面俱到,可以选取 其中一两个原因)提出解决问题的看法。 ① Personally, I think that rather than promote private cars, it’s better to improve the public transportation system with scientific road design and proper management. More importantly, never can traffic jams be eased without self-disciplined citizens.

11 ② In my opinion, the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time, buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used by other vehicles. Besides, underground train and city train should be developed quickly. ③ To solve the problem, some pieces of advice are put forward. I suggest that more streets and roads should be built. Besides, we should take some measures to limit the number of cars. This can decrease the traffic flow.

12 ④ In my opinion, the number of private cars should be put under control. Meanwhile, the government should take some measures to improve some public transportation. What’s more, people must obey traffic regulations strictly. For example, pedestrians don’t cross the streets until the traffic lights are for them.

13 参考范文 From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars on the crowded roads. This humorous picture isn’t just to amuse us. It actually shows us one of the most serious problems. As we all know, the issue of heavy traffic has long been a problem. But why does this happen? I think several factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, the number of private cars keeps growing every day. Secondly, with a large number of population and numbers of cars increasing, some roads still remain unimproved. Thirdly, some people’s lack of awareness of traffic regulation also results in traffic jam, for example, many pedestrians cross the street without watching the Walk lights. Only when our whole society work together to solve all theses problems can we speed up the flow of traffic in the cities.

14 同步练习 2012 届江苏无锡市高三期中考试 请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文,短文应包含以下内容: 1. 这幅漫画想要告诉我们什么? 2. 你所理解的导致这一现象产生的原因是什么? 3. 你觉得怎样做才能解决问题? 注意: 1. 词数 150 个左右(开头句已经给出,不计入总词数)。 2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 The over exploitation of World Heritage sites has raised public concern….

15 参考范文 The over exploitation of World Heritage sites has raised public concern. As is shown in the cartoon, the World Heritage sites are overcrowded with large groups of tourists pushing, taking photos, or even spitting, and smoking everywhere, which has caused great damage to these historic buildings. One of the contributing factors of this phenomenon is that the local government is pushing too hard for the development of tourism, ignoring damage prevention and educational function of the sites. Moreover, some self- centered tourists are uncivilized in public places, ignorant of the historical and cultural value of the sites. From my point of view, the original purpose of setting up World Heritage sites is to help preserve history so that people will be able to enjoy it for generations to come. I suggest both the government and the public should be aware that the best form of conservation is the prevention of damage and committees should be established to undertake important educational work.


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