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1 Hamburger Paragraphs How to write a really great paragraph!

2 Click on me to learn about good paragraphs!

3 The Topic Sentence (Top Bun) Three Prong Thesis Very first sentence of your paragraph. Tells what your paragraph is going to be about. Three Prong Thesis: States three important pieces of information about your topic. Always needs to be indented. There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Next, I love seeing their faces when they discover a concept. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger

4 The First Detail (Tomato) Should not be the most important detail. Needs to follow directly after the topic sentence. Needs to be full of good “juicy” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Next, I love seeing their faces when they discover a concept. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger

5 The Second Detail (Pickle) Still should not be the most important detail. Needs to follow directly after the tomato sentence. Needs to be full of good “spicy” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Next, I love seeing their faces when they discover a concept. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

6 The Third Detail (Lettuce) Should not be the most important detail. Needs to follow directly after the pickle sentence. Needs to be full of good “lettucy” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Next, I love seeing their faces when they discover a concept. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger

7 The Fourth Detail (Cheese) Still not the most important detail. Needs to start differently than other sentences. Needs to be full of good “cheesy” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Next, I love seeing their faces when they discover a concept. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger

8 The Last Detail (Meat) Finally!! The most important detail. Should start differently than most of the other sentences. Needs to be full of good “meaty” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger

9 The Concluding Sentence (Bottom Bun) Should look a lot like the topic sentence. Needs to summarize the topic. Needs to be an obvious end to the paragraph. There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to see a good paragraph on the web!


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