2.  (Worse) This article is a summary of important developments in cellular manufacturing technology.  (Better) This article summarizes important developments in cellular manufacturing technology.

3.  Depending on the sentence‘s context, critical, crucial, essential, pertinent, relevant, significant and vital can be used as alternatives to important when the Chinese meaning is 重要.

4.  (Worse) The guideline makes it specific that all parties will be notified by the proper authorities when a problem arises.  (Better) The guideline specifies that the proper authorities will notify all parties when a problem arises.

5.  (Worse) The applicant is in full compliance with accreditation standards.  (Better) The applicant fully complies with accreditation standards.

6.  (Worse) The proposed procedure makes a provision for a robust manufacturing cell formation in a short execution time.  (Better) The proposed procedure provides a robust manufacturing cell forn1ation in a short execution time.

7.  (Worse) The procedure is to turn on the required machines at specified time intervals.  (Better) The procedure turns on the required machines at specified time intervals.

8.  (Worse) Previous literature (4) provided a formal definition of the MCG problem.  (Better) Previous literature (4) formally defined the MCG problem.

9.  (Worse) The different groups have to reach an agreement on how to make an adjustment of the figures.  (Better) The different groups must agree on how to adjust the figures.

10.  (Worse) A formal definition of what computer networking is included in this section.  (Better) This section formally defines computer networking.

11.  (Worse) An assignment of the project schedule to the site manager is made by the foreman.  (Better) The foreman assigns the project schedule to the site manager.

12.  (Worse) An assessment of project goals is performed by the team leader.  (Better) The team leader assesses project goals.

13.  (Worse) The machine operator conducts transportation of auto parts to the assembly line.  (Better) The machine operator transports auto parts to the assembly line.

14.  (Worse) Arrangement of the assigned tasks is coordinated by the laboratory manager.  (Better) The laboratory manager arranges the assigned tasks.