2. CET4 Writing Focus 评分细则（短文写作满分为 107 分） 100 （漂漂亮亮） 100 分 - 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺。连贯性较好，基 本上无语言点的错误，仅有个别小错。（漂漂亮亮） 78 分（清 清楚楚） 78 分 - 切题。表达清楚，文字通顺。有少量语法错误。（清 清楚楚） 57 分 （马马虎虎） 57 分 - 基本切题。有些地方思想表达不够清楚，文字勉强连 贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。（马马虎虎） （糊里糊涂） 36 分 - （糊里糊涂） （一塌糊涂） 14 分 - （一塌糊涂）

3. To the point- To the point- write as required Clarity- Clarity- make known what you are talking about Coherence- Coherence- make the logic and relationships clear. Being Correct- Being Correct- try to be free of spelling and grammar mistakes

4. Types of Writing 1. Letter writing 1. Letter writing (format is essential) 2. Essay Writing 2. Essay Writing - Problems solving (the best way to), A or B, Advantages or Disadvantages, Yes (Agree) or No (Disagree), Importance of, … 3. Writing on Charts 3. Writing on Charts (table, picture, pie chart, bar chart etc)

5. Big Cities or Small Cities? Part I Writing Directions: thirty Big Cities or Small Cities? 120 outline Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Big Cities or Small Cities? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

6. Big Cities or Small Cities? 1 ）大学毕业后，有人选择去大城市 工作 2 ）有人选择去小城市工作 3 ）你的选择

7. Big Cities or Small Cities? After graduation, some students prefer to look for a job in the big cities while others will choose the small cities. When students graduate some choose to look for a job in big cities while others decide to work in small cities.

8. Big Cities or Small Cities? Big cities- 1. more opportunities for career development 2. jobs of higher salaries 3. better universities 4. better hospitals 5. more choices of entertainment 6. best shops and restaurants

9. Big Cities or Small Cities? Small cities- 1. cheaper housing 2. less stress 3. less pollution 4. less traffic 5. make more friends 6. quieter

10. Big Cities or Small Cities? 1. Beginning- topic introduction and thesis statement Some …, others …. My choice is … 2. Main body- reasons I choose to … Although A is …, and …, A is still my final choice. To begin with, … Next, … In addition, … finally, … 3. Conclusion- natural ending In summary (In sum),

11. Big Cities or Small Cities? Although big cities are characterized by fast pace of life, fierce competition, heavy traffic and expensive housing, my choice of working in big cities is still unchangeable. Because I believe in “ Better city, better life. ” Big cities are better than small ones. To begin with, …

12. Big Cities or Small Cities? In sum, I think the drawback of working in A can be easily be offset by the numerous benefits mentioned above, therefore working in A is my final choice.

13. New Topic Should smoking be banned in all public places? 1. Smoking is harmful to the health 2. Some people insist that smoking be banned in all public places while others ague that it ’ s unfair for the smokers. 3. I think …