1. Rachel Wion Possible Portfolio Samples

2. Idea: Add visual weight such as color to show the message Adjust the placement of the text inside the shape.

3. Advice: Add visual weight such as contrast (drop shadow and darker background) to show the message

4. Add visual weight such as (contrasting color to anchor the shoes to ground) to show the message. Adjust the placement of the text inside the shape.

5. Advice: 1. Add accent of light to show the message and highlight part of the imagery. 2. Adjust the text placement inside the shape. 3. Move title in the top for readability.

6. Change the focal point to the car and not the green road. Open up the header area so the title /heading is clear

7. Advice: Complete the framing concepts. Add call for action in the bottom of the page.

8. Advice: SIMPLIFY THE BUSY BUBBLES SCALE UP THE SLOGAN FOR BETTER READABILITY

9. Create a simple graphic (logo) for the perfume and use it for your merchandising

10. Fix “&”

11. Advice: Balance your elements