1. Writing an Essay

2. Essay Writing … it’s not as bad as you may think! This is your chance on the test to share your own voice and ideas! This is your chance on the test to share your own voice and ideas! Make sure you “talk to the text” on the question itself, and underline exactly what the questions is asking. Make sure you “talk to the text” on the question itself, and underline exactly what the questions is asking. Brainstorm first! Getting your ideas on paper will make you less nervous and help your essay become more clear and specific. Brainstorm first! Getting your ideas on paper will make you less nervous and help your essay become more clear and specific. Break your thoughts into groups, called paragraphs! If you write one long paragraph, you will get one low score. Break your thoughts into groups, called paragraphs! If you write one long paragraph, you will get one low score.

3. How do I start? Step 1: Talk to the question and make sure you know what it is asking you to do (put it in your own words if that helps) Step 1: Talk to the question and make sure you know what it is asking you to do (put it in your own words if that helps) Exp: Write an essay discussing whether or not you would recommend your school to other teenagers. On your paper, talk to this essay topic (TtT!)

4. Brainstorm Choose the best method for brainstorming Choose the best method for brainstorming Pro/Con Chart Pro/Con Chart Spider/bubble brainstorm Spider/bubble brainstorm Anything else that works for you! Anything else that works for you! Now brainstorm about the topic: Write an essay discussing whether or not you would recommend your school to other teenagers. Now brainstorm about the topic: Write an essay discussing whether or not you would recommend your school to other teenagers. ForAgainst

5. What belongs in the introduction paragraph? A hook to draw the reader in A hook to draw the reader in Background information about the topic Background information about the topic Thesis statement Thesis statement

6. What is a hook? A hook is the attention-grabbing first sentence of your essay. A hook is the attention-grabbing first sentence of your essay. We call it a hook because you are trying to “hook” the reader in. We call it a hook because you are trying to “hook” the reader in. Hooks can include: Hooks can include: A question A question An interesting statement, fact, or quote An interesting statement, fact, or quote A thought-provoking idea A thought-provoking idea Whatever you choose, it should be on-topic and appropriate for your audience!

7. Give us an example… For an essay on whether or not to recommend OFL, a hook could include: For an essay on whether or not to recommend OFL, a hook could include: “Why do so many people leave high school before they graduate?” “Why do so many people leave high school before they graduate?” “Many students interviewed at OFL say they prefer OFL to their previous school.” “Many students interviewed at OFL say they prefer OFL to their previous school.” “Independent study is not right for everyone, but many students do better working on their own.” “Independent study is not right for everyone, but many students do better working on their own.”

8. What is background information? Background information is anything your reader needs in order to understand what you are talking about in your thesis and essay. Background information is anything your reader needs in order to understand what you are talking about in your thesis and essay. Assume the reader of your essay is a smart person who doesn’t know much about your topic. Assume the reader of your essay is a smart person who doesn’t know much about your topic. Exp: “Opportunities for Learning is an independent study school that many students choose if the traditional school is not working for them.” Exp: “Opportunities for Learning is an independent study school that many students choose if the traditional school is not working for them.”

9. What is a Thesis Statement? Book defines as “Clearly expressed main idea about a topic” Book defines as “Clearly expressed main idea about a topic” Put another way, the point you are trying to prove in your essay. Put another way, the point you are trying to prove in your essay. The most clear thesis statements include your three main arguments The most clear thesis statements include your three main arguments Exp: “Opportunities for Learning is a good alternative for students because the teachers are caring, the centers are safe and clean, and students can earn credits at a faster pace than at other high schools. Exp: “Opportunities for Learning is a good alternative for students because the teachers are caring, the centers are safe and clean, and students can earn credits at a faster pace than at other high schools.

10. Where do I put my Thesis Statement? The thesis statement is almost always at the very end of the first (introduction) paragraph. The thesis statement is almost always at the very end of the first (introduction) paragraph. Thesis Statement The information in your introduction goes from general (hook) to specific (thesis)

11. You Try! Write a thesis statement Topic is: Is there too much violence in movies?

12. Pair and Share Read your partner what you wrote Read your partner what you wrote Does it Follow the rules we discussed for a thesis? Does it Follow the rules we discussed for a thesis? Tell them 2 things you liked about it Tell them 2 things you liked about it Share one thing they could improve Share one thing they could improve I will visit each group I will visit each group

13. What is a Thesis Statement? Review Book defines as “Clearly expressed main idea about a topic” Book defines as “Clearly expressed main idea about a topic” Put another way, the point you are trying to prove in your essay. Put another way, the point you are trying to prove in your essay. The most clear thesis statements include your three main arguments The most clear thesis statements include your three main arguments Exp: “Opportunities for Learning is a good alternative for students because the teachers are caring, the centers are safe and clean, and students can earn credits at a faster pace than at other high schools. Exp: “Opportunities for Learning is a good alternative for students because the teachers are caring, the centers are safe and clean, and students can earn credits at a faster pace than at other high schools.

14. Putting the introduction together… Independent study is not right for everyone, but many students do better working on their own. Opportunities for Learning is an independent study school that many students choose if the traditional school is not working for them. Opportunities for Learning is a good alternative for students because the teachers are caring, the centers are safe and clean, and students can earn credits at a faster pace than at other high schools.

15. What goes in the body paragraphs? In the most organized essays, the body paragraphs match the order of the thesis, explaining each with more information: In the most organized essays, the body paragraphs match the order of the thesis, explaining each with more information: Exp: Opportunities for Learning is a good alternative for students because 1 the teachers are caring, 2 the centers are safe and clean, and 3 students can earn credits at a faster pace than at other high schools.

16. The Body Paragraphs Introduction Body paragraph 1 Conclusion Body paragraph 2 Body paragraph 3 Thesis: Opportunities for Learning is a good alternative for students because the teachers are caring, the centers are safe and clean, and students can earn credits at a faster pace than at other high schools. The teachers are caring Students can earn credits at a faster pace The centers are safe and clean

17. The Body Paragraphs Within the body paragraphs is where all your ideas and examples are used. You can brainstorm these first, and then bring them together within each body paragraph. Within the body paragraphs is where all your ideas and examples are used. You can brainstorm these first, and then bring them together within each body paragraph.Example: Body ¶ 2: The centers are safe and clean Desks are clean and no one tags on them. The bathroom is always clean and orderly Students feel safe because there are never fights at the center

18. Conclusion Wraps up your essay, restating your main ideas in new words Wraps up your essay, restating your main ideas in new words Adds up the evidence from your essay to make your final point. Adds up the evidence from your essay to make your final point. Think back to the hamburger: The final bite (last sentence) of your essay should be delicious! It should leave your reader with a good understanding of your main point. Think back to the hamburger: The final bite (last sentence) of your essay should be delicious! It should leave your reader with a good understanding of your main point.

19. Shape of the Conclusion The information in your conclusion goes from specific (restatement of your thesis in new words) to more general (bigger ideas about the topic)

20. Now fill in the information on the planning chart for the OFL essay… Introduction Body paragraph 1 Conclusion Body paragraph 2 Body paragraph 3

21. You Try! Write an introductory paragraph for the thesis you wrote. Write an introductory paragraph for the thesis you wrote. What are three points you want to share? What are three points you want to share? Just list the points as a body but do not write them Just list the points as a body but do not write them Write a conclusion that summarizes your points Write a conclusion that summarizes your points