1. Graduate Diploma Reading & Writing Session 6 Sentence Structure Grammar Essay Planning

3. National wealth and holiday entitlement Clocking off Oct 21st 2009 From Economist.com Are holidays good for the economy? STRIKING the right balance between life and work can be tricky. Employees in European countries tend to have a better deal than most, enjoying more days off work than their counterparts in Asia or America. Workers in Finland, France and Brazil have the most generous statutory allowance, getting 30 days of holiday every year. Americans work longer hours: theirs is the only rich country that does not give any statutory paid holiday. (In practice, most workers get around 15 days off.) This work ethic may in turn help to explain Americans' material wealth. Even adjusting for purchasing-power parity, America generates more wealth per person than all but a handful of mainly oil-rich economies such as Norway.

4. EXTRA INFORMATION SUBJECT (noun phrase) VERB PHRASEOBJECT / COMPLEMENT (noun phrase / adjective) EXTRA INFORMATION STRIKING the right balance between life and work can betricky. Employees in European countries tend to havea better deal than mostenjoying more days off work than their counterparts in Asia or America.

5. EXTRA INFORMATION SUBJECT (noun phrase) VERB PHRASEOBJECT / COMPLEMENT (noun phrase / adjective) EXTRA INFORMATION STRIKING the right balance between life and work can betricky Employees in European countries tend to havea better deal than mostenjoying more days off work than their counterparts in Asia or America Workers in Finland, France and Brazil havethe most generous statutory allowance getting 30 days of holiday every year AmericansWorklonger hours theirsisthe only rich country that does not give any statutory paid holiday In practicemost workersgetaround 15 days off This work ethicmay in turn help to explain Americans' material wealth Even adjusting for purchasing-power parity Americageneratesmore wealth per person than all but a handful of mainly oil-rich economies such as Norway.

6. Strike right balance between life and work can be trick. Employees European countries tend to have good deal than most, enjoy more days off work than their counterparts Asia or America. Workers Finland, France and Brazil have most generous statutory allow, get 30 days holiday every year. Americans work longer hours: theirs be only rich country no give any statutory pay holiday. (practice, most workers get around 15 days off.) This work ethic may turn help explain Americans' material wealth. Even adjust for purchasing- power parity, America generate more wealth per person than all but handful of main oil-rich economies such as Norway.

7. National wealth and holiday entitlement Clocking off Oct 21st 2009 From Economist.com Are holidays good for the economy? STRIKING the right balance between life and work can be tricky. Employees in European countries tend to have a better deal than most, enjoying more days off work than their counterparts in Asia or America. Workers in Finland, France and Brazil have the most generous statutory allowance, getting 30 days of holiday every year. Americans work longer hours: theirs is the only rich country that does not give any statutory paid holiday. (In practice, most workers get around 15 days off.) This work ethic may in turn help to explain Americans' material wealth. Even adjusting for purchasing-power parity, America generates more wealth per person than all but a handful of mainly oil-rich economies such as Norway.

8. Graduate Diploma Reading & Writing Session 6 Essays

9. When the first Europeans came to the North American continent, they encountered the completely new cultures of the Native American peoples of North America. Native Americans, who had highly developed cultures in many respects, must have been as curious about the strange European manners and customs as the Europeans were curious about them. As always happens when two or more cultures come into contact, there was a cultural exchange. Native Americans adopted some of the Europeans’ ways, and the Europeans adopted some of their ways. As a result, Native Americans have made many valuable contributions to modern U.S. culture, particularly in the areas of language, art, food, and government.

10. So what’s the topic of this introduction? What should the title of the text be? When the first Europeans came to the North American continent, they encountered the completely new cultures of the Native American peoples of North America. Native Americans, who had highly developed cultures in many respects, must have been as curious about the strange European manners and customs as the Europeans were curious about them. As always happens when two or more cultures come into contact, there was a cultural exchange. Native Americans adopted some of the Europeans’ ways, and the Europeans adopted some of their ways. As a result, Native Americans have made many valuable contributions to modern U.S. culture, particularly in the areas of language, art, food, and government.

11. Native American Influences on Modern U.S. Culture When the first Europeans came to the North American continent, they encountered the completely new cultures of the Native American peoples of North America. Native Americans, who had highly developed cultures in many respects, must have been as curious about the strange European manners and customs as the Europeans were curious about them. As always happens when two or more cultures come into contact, there was a cultural exchange. Native Americans adopted some of the Europeans’ ways, and the Europeans adopted some of their ways. As a result, Native Americans have made many valuable contributions to modern U.S. culture, particularly in the areas of language, art, food, and government. Which sentence is the THESIS STATEMENT?

12. Native American Influences on Modern U.S. Culture When the first Europeans came to the North American continent, they encountered the completely new cultures of the Native American peoples of North America. Native Americans, who had highly developed cultures in many respects, must have been as curious about the strange European manners and customs as the Europeans were curious about them. As always happens when two or more cultures come into contact, there was a cultural exchange. Native Americans adopted some of the Europeans’ ways, and the Europeans adopted some of their ways. As a result, Native Americans have made many valuable contributions to modern U.S. culture, particularly in the areas of language, art, food, and government. How many paragraphs will follow this introduction? What will be the subject of each paragraph?

13. Look at your handout from Writing Academic English by Oshima & Hogue to see if your predictions were correct. Can you locate the topic sentence in each paragraph?

14. Body Paragraph 1 : First of all, Native Americans left a permanent imprint on the English language.

15. Body Paragraph 2 : Art is another area of important Native American contributions.

16. Body Paragraph 1 : First of all, Native Americans left a permanent imprint on the English language. Body Paragraph 2 : Art is another area of important Native American contributions. Body Paragraph 3: In addition to language and art, agriculture is another are in which Native Americans had a great and lasting influence on the peoples who arrived here from Europe, Africa, and Asia.

17. Body Paragraph 1 : First of all, Native Americans left a permanent imprint on the English language. Body Paragraph 2 : Art is another area of important Native American contributions. Body Paragraph 3: In addition to language and art, agriculture is another are in which Native Americans had a great and lasting influence on the peoples who arrived here from Europe, Africa, and Asia. Body Paragraph 4 : Finally, it may surprise some people to learn that Americans are also indebted to the native people for our form of government.

18. Body Paragraph 1 : First of all, Native Americans left a permanent imprint on the English language. Body Paragraph 2 : Art is another area of important Native American contributions. Body Paragraph 3: In addition to language and art, agriculture is another are in which Native Americans had a great and lasting influence on the peoples who arrived here from Europe, Africa, and Asia. Body Paragraph 4 : Finally, it may surprise some people to learn that Americans are also indebted to the native people for our form of government. Note the lexical threads in each paragraph related to its main topic.

23. Essay Planning

24. Consider the following question: What factors are important to parents when they choose a school for their children to attend? Are the same factors important to the children?

25. What factors are important to parents when they choose a school for their children to attend? Are the same factors important to the children? How would you answer this question? Discuss your ideas with your partners.

26. Model Introduction Styles -Funnel introduction -Dramatic, interesting, or funny story -Surprising statistics or facts - Historical background