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PARALLELISM Graceful Writing!
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If joined sentence parts are not equal, faulty parallelism has occurred.
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FAULTY: Bill lectured on planting and how to harvest. (noun joined to phrase) REVISED: Bill lectured on planting and harvesting.
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FAULTY: I know the answer and what it signifies. (noun joined to a clause) REVISED: I know the answer and its significance.
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FAULTY: The teacher asked us to help decorate the gym and if we could get the materials. (phrase joined to a clause) REVISED: The teacher asked us if we could help decorate the gym and if we could get the materials.
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Correct the faulty parallelism A new employee orientation program is both worthwhile and a necessity. The chosen site should have adequate facilities for receiving raw materials and distribution of finished products.
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As a merger prospect, the company is well organized, soundly managed, and a good profit potential has been demonstrated. The supervisor is industrious, intelligent, and knows how to manage her personnel.
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Jack was a miser, a bachelor, and egotistical. Both of these kinds of hiking boots provide protection from water, dirt, and other abrasive materials.
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He said that he’d return from New York soon and for us to work hard during his absence. Everyone complained about the heat and how humid it was.
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