2. WRITING BODY PARAGRAPHS Advanced English 6 Mrs. Hampton

3. SO, WHAT DO I DO?  If you have written a claim and an introduction, what comes next? Body paragraphs!  Body paragraphs are the meat of the sandwich  Next to the claim they are the most important because they give your evidence DETAIL  They also prove your point through talking about why your points matter

4. WHEN DO I MAKE THEM?  You make them after a claim is written  You make them after an introduction is written  You make them after you lay out your boxes and bullets in your essay packet  You make them BEFORE conclusion

5. WHAT DOES A BODY PARAGRAPH LOOK LIKE? 11st sentence: topic sentence that relates back to thesis 22nd sentence-4 sentence: support sentences (at least one of these is a quote taken directly from the book) 55th sentence: transition-leads to next sentence (also prompts)

6. HOLD ON, A PROMPT?  Turn to the prompt page/template page in your literary essay folder  If you have not already chosen yours, read through and choose the top 3 you like  Mark those choices now  Look at how to introduce/explain quotations as well.

7. HOW MANY BODY PARAGRAPHS ARE THERE?  There are 3  Each one has the same 5 sentence set up  This means you write a total of 15 sentences mimimum for the middle of your essay

8. HOW DO I MAKE A TOPIC SENTENCE?  Simply state one of the reasons for your claim and form a logical sentence  The land was important to the Logans in the text because it united their family together in an effort to live, they had to fight to keep their land from the white landowners, and it stood for a metaphor for hope despite difficult times.  Example: The land demonstrates its importance through serving as a metaphor for hope despite difficult times.

9. FIRST COMES TOPIC SENTENCE, NEXT COMES CONNECTING SENTENCES  The land demonstrates its importance through serving as a metaphor for hope despite difficult times. Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry ends with Cassie reflecting on the land, “I always knew it would be a part of me” (276). Cassie shows that through the hardships and racial oppression in the book that a person can still overcome and hope to be better. This was a vital part of the text that could not have happened unless Mildred Taylor connected the land to the families values.  Ok, so there are 4 sentences here.

10. STOP! DO NOT PLOP THAT QUOTATION!  What do I mean by plop? Do not just put a quotation in your writing that does not make sense.  Go to the Template page Introducing/Explaining a quotation section of your packet  Use ICE! Ice is a great way to remember to introduce your quotation, cite your quotation from the book, and then explain your quotation in your writing.

11. ICE!

12. HERE IS AN EXAMPLE OF ICE  Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry ends with Cassie reflecting on the land, “I always knew it would be a part of me” (276). She demonstrates that the land was more than something that tied her family together, it was something that stood for what she fought for physically and emotionally as a person.  Breakdown:  Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry ends with Cassie reflecting on the land, “I always knew it would be a part of me” (276). She demonstrates that the land was more than something that tied her family together, it was something that stood for what she fought for physically and emotionally as a person.  Without the introduction lead in, the reader would be confused with “it was a part of her”

13. WHAT ABOUT THAT PESKY SENTENCE #5? The fifth sentence is a transition sentence. You can use the prompt page in order to get some ideas. Thesis reminder:The land was important to the Logans in the text because it united their family together in an effort to live, they had to fight to keep their land from the white landowners, and it stood for a metaphor for hope despite difficult times. We already talked about the metaphor for hope, we need to talk about how it united their family together. So…

14. TRANSITION SENTENCES  Common transition signal words: accordingly, hence, since, so, therefore, thus, consequently  Common transition signal words to move to conclusion: as a result, in conclusion, then, in short, in sum, it follows then,  (Taken from They Say, I Say by Gerald Graff

15. The final result is…  The land demonstrates its importance through serving as a metaphor for hope despite difficult times. Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry ends with Cassie reflecting on the land, “I always knew it would be a part of me” (276). Cassie shows that through the hardships and racial oppression in the book that a person can still overcome and hope to be better. This was a vital part of the text that could not have happened unless Mildred Taylor connected the land to the families values. In the effort to keep hope alive, the Logan family was united together to fight against the white landowners.  Next Paragraph Starts: When Papa set the cotton on fire was one example of how the Logan family came together to save TJ and remain safe.  The last sentence TRANSITIONS into the next paragraph. The next paragraph will talk about how the Logans are united.

16. All of these lead to…

17. A ROUGH DRAFT!  Use your boxes and bullets in your essay packet to help outline your rough draft.  Take your completed boxes and bullets to make your body paragraphs  Revised introduction + Body Paragraphs + Conclusion =Rough Draft #1  We will talk about conclusions tomorrow in class.  Rough draft due Monday, 11/10-all five paragraphs