1. Writing tips What not to write in your paper MLA Paper

2. Think nike – just do it DO NOT TELL ME WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO TELL ME ---JUST DO IT!!!!! Ex. In this essay I am going to explain…. I am going to tell you all about…. UGHH! ARGHHH! THIS IS TERRIBLE WRITING

3. Nike UGHH!ARGHHH!This is the way to write it In this essay I am going to tell you about the whole Nature vs. Nurture debate. My essay is about nature vs. nurture personality and whether you are affected by your genes or your personality. Are we born with our personalities or do we learn them or control them? When you were born, you had a set of traits from your parents. But can you change those traits as you grow older?

4. Nike If all else fails This is the way to write it Just start with your topic. Nature vs. Nurture is a debate that has been going on around the world for quite some time.

5. Take out personal pronouns Personal pronounFormal style When I first read about the debate on nature versus nurture, I must admit I was confused. I understood what the article was talking about; I just didn’t understand why people would argue over such a subject. At first the nature versus nurture debate may seem trivial or pointless, but on further examination, the implications of the answers to this question become clear. If we are born with it, can we be held accountable? How much of our behavior do we control?

6. Take out personal pronouns Personal pronounCorrected Nurture is when someone teaches you or you got it from where you grew up, but it’s not in your blood. In nurture theory, leadership is taught or learned by experience, but leadership is not in your blood.

7. Avoid Slang SlangCorrected Now a days Kinda Kids ‘All about’ meaning interested in Today Similar to Children Interested in – committed to – devoted to

8. Grammar Issues Bad grammarCorrected The twins, they… Would of Could of Should of Pick one! Would HAVE Could HAVE Should HAVE

9. When referring to your author No matter how much time you have spent ‘getting to know’ an author through research – YOU ARE NOT ON A FIRST NAME BASIS. References to any author within you paper that do not include the author’s full name should be LAST NAME ONLY.

10. Referring to Author Informal – IncorrectCorrect David found that the 10,000 hour rule was most helpful for people born with natural talent in athletics (Bregman). Epstein found that the 10,000 hour rule was most helpful for people born with natural talent in athletics (Bregman).