1. Run-ons She finds out he is a montegue and they think that they are in love with their enemys but they have only spent a couple minutes with each other and they know nothing about each other and Romeo was in love with rosaline and he meets Juliet and thinks she is Gorgeous.

2. Friar Laurence also is more demanding on how things go so when he tells someone to do something they do it like when he told romeo to go to when he was banished and F.L. would send messages he did it so the chances of his plan falling through is slim at to where if the nurse to him to do something she could change her mind or say to much stuff at once no one would understand what they were to do so no one would listen and things just wouldn’t work out.

3. Comma Splices In the beginning, Romeo was in love with Rosaline, he said Rosaline was the only girl for him. Romeo professes his love for Juliet, Juliet responds love is better than understanding.

4. I’m glad you are recovering from this terrible tragedy. Romeo is being vanished from Verona, what are you plans from here on out?