1. How to Improve Writing

2. 1. 总分 25 分， 5 个档次。 2. 文章内容和语言初步定其档次。 3. 词数 120 的减 2 分。 4. 内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性 和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5. 拼写与标点符号视其对交际的影响程度予 以考虑。 6. 书写较差影响交际，降低一个档次。 高考作文评分原则

3. （邯郸市一模）假如你是李华，你的国际朋友 Paul 邀 请你下个星期天去他们学校参加文化交流活动并介绍中 国传统绘画。但是你的爷爷生病住院， 不得不谢绝他 的邀请。请根据下面的要点给 Paul 用英语写一封回信。 要点： 1. 谢绝 Paul 的邀请。 2. 说明你的理由。 3. 推荐你的同学 Anna 参加。

4. Z 作文图片 1. 书写 2. 字数 3. 段落及要点 4. 改错（单词拼写，短语，词形，词义 混淆，时态。标点，语法句法）

5. 第五档要求（ 21-25 分） 1. 书写规范，卷面整洁，字数适当，结构 清晰，层次分明，格式完整。 2. 覆盖了所有内容要点，时态正确。 3. 正确应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇 及丰富的句式。 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全 文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。

6. Ways to Improve Writing

7. 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to/struck me. 3. He knows a lot about foreign literature. He has a good knowledge of foreign literature. Advanced Words

8. 1.The little girl knows so many things. It surprises him. 5)What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 3)The little girl knows so many things, which surprises him. 4)It surprises him that the little girl knows so many things. 1)The little girl knows so many things that it surprises him. 2)So many things does the girl know that it surprises him. Advanced Sentences

9. 2. The young man heard the bad news. He couldn’t help crying. Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying. 3.He fell asleep. The door was open. He fell asleep with the door open. On hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying. The moment/As soon as he heard the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.

10. Advanced Sentences 1.Clauses Noun clause （名词性从句） Attributive clause （定语从句） Adverbial clause （状语从句） 5.Inversion （倒装） 3. Emphasis （强调句） 4.Subjuntive Mood （虚拟语气） 2.Structures doing done to do with…. 6….

11. 表递进关系的 表转折关系 表列举 moreover,besides, in addition,what’s more, furthermore,what’s worse,to make matters worse … however,on the contrary,though, but… firstly,secondly…last but not least for one thing …for another Transitional Words

12. Dear Paul, Thank you very much for your invitation. I’d like to accept it to introduce traditional Chinese painting to you and your friends, but I’m really sorry I can’t. Dear Paul, Thank you very much for your invitation. I’d like to accept it to introduce traditional Chinese painting to you and your friends, but I’m really sorry I can’t. ① My grandpa is seriously ill and he is in hospital. ② I am his only grandson.I have to take care of him. ① ① My grandpa is seriously ill in hospital. ② As his only grandson, I have to take care of him.

13. ③ About the speech, I recommend Anna. That is my friend. She knows a lot about painting. ④ She is interested in Chinese painting and begins to learn painting when she was 4. ⑤ She also speaks English well and has good communication skills. This will help make the activity successful. ③ Sorry again and best wishes. Yours, Lihua Sorry again and best wishes. Yours, Lihua ③ As for the speech, I recommend my friend Anna, who has a good knowledge of painting. ④ Interested in Chinese painting, she began to learn it at an early age. ⑤ She also speaks English well and has good communication skills, which will help make the activity successful.

14. Dear Paul, Thank you very much for your invitation. I’d like to accept it to introduce traditional Chinese painting to you and your friends, but I’m sorry to say that I can’t. My grandpa is seriously ill in hospital.As his only grandson, I have to look after him. As for the introduction speech, I recommend my friend Anna,who has a good knowledge of painting. Interested in Chinese painting, she began to learn it at an early age. She also speaks English well and has good communication skills, which will help make the activity successful. Sorry again and best wishes! Yours, Lihua Besides, her excellent oral English and communication skills will make the activity a success.

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16. Homework Rewrite the topic in Shijiazhuang Paper

17. My grandpa is seriously ill and he is in hospital. 1)Advanced words: 2)Attributive clause: 3)Adverbial clause: 4)Emphasis: 5)Inversion : My grandpa is seriously ill in hospital. My grandpa,who is seriously ill, is in hospital. My grandpa is in hospital because he is seriously ill. It is because he is seriously ill that my grandpa is in hospital. So seriously ill is my grandpa that he is in hospital.

18. About the speech, I recommend Anna. That is my friend. She knows a lot about painting. 1)About the speech, I recommend Anna who is my best friend and knows a lot about painting. 2) About the speech, I recommend my friend Anna, who knows a lot about painting. 3) As for the speech, I recommend Anna, who has a good knowledge of painting.

19. 板书设计 Handwriting Word number paragraph impression How to Improve Writing Aims: 1. To get to know evaluation criteria of writing. 2.To master the ways to perfect writing. Points Punctuation Tense Language mistakes 10 15 17 20 content Advanced words Advanced sentences Transitional words Shining points 21-25