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Pick up your English binder. Turn to “Tracking My Growth in Narrative Writing: W73c.” Pull up your personal narrative on the laptop. Good News! 3 rd hour is leading the English binder challenge! Organized and all in place. 6 th – not well organized. 5,6,8,9 – Not all binders put away in the proper place!
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Sentence pattern 4 – open with an adverb An adverb: A word that changes a verb, adjective or another adverb by telling how something is done, when something is done, where something is done, or to what extent something is done.
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These adverbs are ALSO transitions! 1. Currently,10. *Sleepily, 2. Immediately, 11. Quickly, 3. Recently, 12. Carefully 4. Gradually, 5. Presently, 6. Simultaneously, 7. Briefly, 8. Finally, 9. Suddenly *Sleepily – may or may not be a transition, but will definitely work for pattern.
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The dog was catching up. He bit my ankle while I was climbing up the fence. I finally made it out the stranger’s yard. …Finally, I made it out of the stranger’s yard.
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Where can we add an adverb? I kept getting killed over and over again. I just wanted to throw my control out the window. I was so mad that I quit playing the game. Eventually, I was so mad that I quit playing the game.
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Look through your personal narrative and find a sentence that starts with a word ending in “ly.” If you do not have a sentence starting with an adverb ending in "ly," then edit a sentence to begin with an adverb. Done with Pattern 4 and your story? Dialogue! Hooks! Closings Go to Weebly and look at more revising ideas. Final Draft – due Friday
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These adverbs are ALSO transitions! 1. Currently,10. *Sleepily, 2. Immediately, 11. Quickly, 3. Recently, 12. Carefully 4. Gradually, 5. Presently, 6. Simultaneously, 7. Briefly, 8. Finally, 9. Suddenly *Sleepily – may or may not be a transition, but will definitely work for pattern.
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Planner – CW: Add an adverb; HW – final draft of story due Friday at the end of class. Put your name on a Post-It. Put your Post-It on the board. I feel great about my story being done by Friday. I hope my story will be done by Friday. Friday? You can’t be serious. Log off. 9 th hour – put computers away. Put away binders
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Take out a sheet of paper. Write your heading. Write the title: Social Media Effects After taking the quiz, write a PARAGRAPH 1 st sentence (topic sentence) – main idea of the article. Include 3 pieces of evidence from the article. Include: who, what, where, when, why Last sentence – closing idea
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