1. Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view

2. Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view “gold” “brown” What do these words make you think of? (We call this connotations!) “thundering” “champagne” “red”

3. Daljit Nagra comes from a Punjabi background and was born and brought up in West London and Sheffield. He lives in London, and works as a secondary school English teacher. Many of his poems explore the experiences and anxieties of second- generation British-born Indians. Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view

4. Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view Now that we’ve read the poem I want you to read it on your own and annotate it: What is the poem about? How do you know? Which words do you find interesting? Can you find any examples of language features? How does the poem end?

5. Dad parked our Granada, champagne-gold by our superstore on Blackstock Road, my brother’s eyes scanning the men who scraped the pavement frost to the dole, one ‘got on his bike’ over the hill or the few who warmed us a thumbs-up for the polished recovery of our new-sprayed car. 4) What does the colour of the car symbolise? What impression might the locals have of this family? 1) What is this line a metaphor for? 2) Why has the colloquial “thumbs-up” been used here? 3) What does the use of “few” emphasise? 5) Why is the car described as “new-sprayed”? 5a) What has the car come to be a symbol of then? Imagery Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view

6. Council mums at our meat display nestled against a pane with white trays swilling kidneys, liver and a sandy block of corned beef, loud enough about the way darkies from down south Come op ta Yorksha, mekkin claaims on aut theh can befor buggrin off theh flash caahs! 4) Who are the “darkies”? 1) Why does the poet include “council” as well as “mums”? What did he want to highlight? 2) “Swilling” and “sandy” are very vivid images, what do they suggest to you? 3) Kidneys, liver and corned beef are all cheap cuts of meat. How does this link to the setting? 5) Why has the poet chosen to include Yorkshire dialect here? Who is speaking the dialect and what does it highlight about them? EXT: Why is it ironic that the council estate mums are so rude? Imagery Poetic Devices Imagery Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view

7. . At nine, we left the emptied till open, clicked the dials of the safe. Bolted two metal bars across the back door (with a new lock). Spread trolleys at ends of the darkened aisles. Then we pressed the code for the caged alarm and rushed the precinct to check it was throbbing red. 4) Why has the alarm been described as “throbbing red”? What technique has been used? 1) Why has enjambement been used on the word “bolted”? What does the word suggest? 2) Why have two metal bars been used? 3)Why has the poet chosen to use brackets as punctuation? 5)What atmosphere and tone has been created by this stanza? Which words tell you this? 6) What do the “spread trolleys” create in the dark if they are “spread”? What is this line a metaphor for? Poetic Devices Structure Poetic Devices Tone / voice Imagery Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view

8. Thundering down the graffiti of shutters against the valley of high-rise flats. Ready for the getaway to our cul-de-sac’d semi-detached, until we stood stock –still: watching the car skin pucker, bubbling smarts of acid. In the unstoppable pub-roar from the John O’Gaunt across the forecourt. Rhyme: Does the poem have a set, regular rhyme scheme? Why do you think this is? 1) Why has Nagra chosen to use “thundering”? What effect does it create? 5) What technique has been used here? Why is it effective? 2) What does the word “graffiti” tell us about the area ? 4) What effect is created by the use of the colon? 3) What technique has been used here? Why? Structure Rhythm / Rhyme Poetic Devices Imagery Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view

9. We returned up to the shop, lifted a shutter, queued at the sink, walked down again. Three of us, each carrying pans of cold water. Then we swept away the bonnet-leaves from gold to the brown of our former colour. 1) What is this line a metaphor for? 2) Read the last line? How would you describe the tone and voice of the speaker here? Is this different to the beginning of the poem? Tone / Voice Imagery 3) Why is the last stanza 5 lines long, when the others are 7? Structure What themes and messages are conveyed within the poem? Ideas Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view

10. Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view How does Daljit Nagra use language to convey his point of view? What is his point of view? What quotes would you use to answer this question?

11. Aims of the lesson: To analyse the language and structure of the poem and work out the meaning To write about how the poet conveys his point of view Don’t forget your Home Learning sheet!