1. Two-three students. DOING something Not looking like fools at the camera. Cuts off at waist.

2. In short, if you have a helping verb or linking verb, it’s probably wrong. Wait. What IS active voice? ACTIVE VOICE – read Passive – are reading ACTIVE – peruse Passive – are perusing ACTIVE – enjoy Passive – is enjoying Yearbook photos are written in TWO SENTENCES. FIRST SENTENCE 1.Must be PRESENT TENSE 2.Tell grade and FULL names 3.Describe action in photo 4.BE IN ACTIVE VOICE!!!

3. Yearbook photos are written in TWO SENTENCES. SECOND SENTENCE 1.Quote from one of the people in the photo 2.Adds new information (doesn’t just avoid repeating…) not seen in the photo. 3.Uses said as attribution (not remarked, remembered, laughed, stated, etc…) 4.Do NOT make-up quote or change the quote to suit needs.