1. By. Ryotaro Iwamura

2. Pre writing Mind map I will go to choose about football player or world cup. Anybody knows the world cup. But I have no ideas what I have to make questions for world cup. So I will choose about football player. But that football player needs to be very famous. I will talk about that football player child hood, football life and how many times he got titles.

3. Gatheri ng Grid Subject: Cristiano Ronaldo Source1 www.crist ianoronal do.com Source 2 http://www.transf ermarkt.com/crist iano- ronaldo/profil/spi eler/8198 Source 3 http://www.ro naldo7.net/ Question 1 Birth of Cristiano Ronaldo. His birth is Feb. 5 th, 1985. He was born in Portugal and he was lived in Funchal Madeira His mother gave him name, “Cristiano Ronaldo Dos Santos Aveiro Question 2 About His football life Pro league 2003-2009: Manchester United 2009-: Real Madrid Junior league 1993-1995: Andorinha 1995-1998: Nacional Da Madeira 1998-2003: Sporting Lisbon He stared football at 8 years old. Question 3 How many times Cristiano Ronaldo got titles? In Manchester United Englischer Meister:3 Champions League- Sieger:1 Englischer Ligapokal-Sieger:2 FIFA-Klub- Welmeister:1 Englischer Pokalsieger:1 In Real Madrid Champions League-Sieger:1 Spanischer Superpokalsieger:1 UEFA-Supercup-Sieger:1 Spanischer Meister:1 Individual 74 titles

4. Writing Out line #1Cristiano Ronaldo Cristiano Ronaldo is famous football player. B. there is 3 important parts of C, R’s life C. Birth, titles and his football life. #2 Birth of C,R. Feb 5 th, 1985. He was born in Portugal and he was lived in Funchal Madeira. His full name is Cristiano Ronaldo Dos Santos Aveiro. #3 about his football life. Pro league 2003-2009: Manchester United 2009-: Real Madrid Junior league 1993-1995: Andorinha 1995-1998: Nacional Da Madeira 1998-2003: Sporting Lisbon He stared football at 8 years old.

5. #4 Titles of C, R. In Manchester United  Englischer Meister:3  Champions League-Sieger:1  Englischer Ligapokal-Sieger:2  FIFA-Klub-Welmeister:1  Englischer Pokalsieger:1  In Real Madrid  Champions League-Sieger:1  Spanischer Superpokalsieger:1  UEFA-Supercup-Sieger:1  Spanischer Meister:1 Individual  74 titles.  #5 conclusions He has a best free kick (FK) shooting skills and dribbling skills. He’s kind to supporters and team mates. And, his football skills make us feel excited. If Cristiano Ronaldo will retire, he will come up to football legend and any football supporters won’t forget him forever.

6. 1 st draft  Histories of Cristiano Ronaldo  Cristiano Ronaldo is famous football player. Birth, Titles and football life, there is 3 important parts of C, R’s life.   Birth of C, R  He was born on February 5 th, 1985 in Portugal and he was lived in Funchal Madeira. His mother gave him name “Cristiano Ronaldo Dos Santos Aveiro”   About his football life.  He started football at 8 years old. On 1993-1995, he was in junior teams of Andorinha, on 1995-1998, he was in junior teams of National Da Madeira, on 1998-2003 he was in junior teams of Sporting Lisbon, On 2003-2009, he was in Manchester United and now, he is in Real Madrid. 

7.  Titles of C, R.  In Manchester United, he got 3 Englischer Meisters, 1 Champions League-Sieger, 2 Englischer Ligapokal-Siegers, 1 FIFA-Klub-Welmeiter and 1 Englischer PokalSieger.   In Real Madris, he got 1 Champions League, 1 Spanischer Superpokalsieger, 1 UEFA-Supercup-Sieger and, 1 Spanischer Meister.   And he got 74 titles for individual.   C, R’s characters and football skills  He has a best free kick (FK) shooting skills and dribbling skills. He’s kind to supporters and team mates. And, his football skills make us feel excited. If Cristiano Ronaldo will retire, he will come up to football legend and any football supporters won’t forget him forever.

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10. 3 goals 1. sep 22th I’m going to pick one topic. And researches that topic. And make grid and write questions, answer and sources on grid. 2. Oct 10 th I’m going to finish concusions of out line and1st draft for today. After finish that, I will check grammars, words wrong and do words choice

11. 3. Oct 22th Yesterday night, I worked for my final draft but it didn’t finish it yet. So today, I will finish my final draft, final essay and start to work on my PPT.

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